3JJt8M Way cool! Some very valid points! I appreciate you penning this post and the rest of the website is also really good.

ZAx2S1 Thank you ever so for you article post.Much thanks again. Great.

Z9I8oj Im grateful for the article post.Much thanks again. Fantastic.

O0J77v Really enjoyed this article. Keep writing.

S0yrEv Im grateful for the article.Really thank you! Will read on...

 I just loved the plot behind this story, the positive support of parents and all concerned is wonderful!  The revenge element that made this story all but disappeared as Carol found the inner happiness that she didn't even know she had.  I tend to favor the shorter stories but would like to see a sequel of this one.  My complements to you as a true writer...please give us more!

Mariah

A dream come true and the support of evey one  was great

What a wonderful story, I love the fact that your stories are all about homosexuals, a man after my own heart!

Your story is very much a dream coming true. Thanks.

A sweet story  I do wish you could have involved his mom  more especially when carol decided to make the leap with hormones  ( i love hormone stories  ) this was sweet but short   we need some fleshing out  in such areas as her feelings the first time she came mouth to cock and the emotions that she or any girl goes through when first doing that///Thanks for the great story though

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, though I think, as others have pointed out, that it would be even better to see how Mary reacts to Carol outdoing her in so many ways.  All in all, a little rushed near the end, but well told, and serves that spoiled little so-and-so right! ^_^

Beautiful story! Please continue it. Love, jeannette

DIANE IS RIGHT JANET, LAST 2 PARAGRAPHS NEED EXPANDING ALL IN ALL, I LIKED IT'

A cross dresser puts a brat in her place? No, a guy turned girl wins out in the end. Janet, you need to elaborate on the conflict between mary and the new girl in an expanded sequel

  Well done and a great story ... nice fun and mostly clean
some times a story will live for ever this is one that has promise
to do just that ..... thank you ..
        Thank you   xoxoxoxoxoxoxo  Rone  :)

I believe this story could be elaborated on.  It was flowing so wonderful thne it was as though the road came to a dead end stop. I like reading Janets writings and this story certainly can withstand a longer and more concise writing entailing the events that put Mary Hanover in her place.

Well Diane, Janet did write a fine story here, however, the last two paragraphs went by very fleetingly. The pargraph starting with school, for instance, could have been elaborated on, substantially. Like How did Mary react to Carol's winning Prom Queen; how did Mary react to Carol's being elected head cheerleader? Why didn't Mary try harder to sabotage Mike and Carol's relationship? What did Mary try to get her father to do in order to intercede? These questions and a whole lot more, need to be answered. It was a fine story up to that point. I know Janet is a fine author, but, the questions I asked remain unanswered. The last paragraph with Mary going off to finishing school in Switzerland, was also incomplete. The people of the town should have been there to wish her goodbye, with sneers, jeers and cheers. AS I said the last two paragraphs are grossly incomplete.

Barbara Lynn Terry

It defies the logic why Janet doesn't have a comment on everyone of her stories by now. It seems that this writer is so very prolific and talented that she should be well worth the time to give her the acknowledgements that she so deservidly should have for all her works.

I've now read almost all of her works and if I should have passed a few by I'll get to them as well.

Janet is always in a rush to get them out that there are times when she may miss a spelling or such but that never has distracted from the vast array of subjects and characters she allows us to see.

This story like her many others is a timeless tale that will live on forever. She shows us a talent like in all her stories that comes from the heart and she always brings that out.

Thank you Janet for the tireless efforts you have given to bring us so many stories.

Diane