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The Massage
by Jack Andrews

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Comment by thruholewizard on 02/04/15
I doubt that you will read this being as you wrote this so long ago ,but on the outside chance that you will I will tell you how much I enjoyed your story . I wish we found out why Melissa did this .What happens now ?? Won't  Patrick have alot to say ?
  At any rate I really enjoyed the story and wish there was more to it .


           Stephen J


Comment by wej on 03/08/01
good story, keep up the details, make sure he enjoys it at the end... and that he is quite voluptous.

Comment by Amber on 03/07/01
Keep going and I like how this is a real Forced Feminization story. Hope you can keep and don't let the main character enjoy his newself

Comment by Nellie D on 03/06/01
Well we know where this is headed but the rest of the transformation process is still to be told. Will the good description and detail continue? I hope so. The writing is decent with few mistakes. Hope to see more soon.



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