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MAU: Perpetual Pixies
by Danielle J

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Comment by Gracelyn on 12/13/11
A mitnue saved is a minute earned, and this saved hours!
Comment by GJ on 09/07/11
Great Storie..it's a funny and defferent kind of fate for the guys(well defferent in a good way).talk about a new look on life.Beging a Gojira fan made this story even more amusing.like the mothra intro at the end..you should of done a part two...T show the effects on the kids,and what happens when a big worm thing starts going acrross the city. Well it was good work..
Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 03/31/04
Dear Danielle;

 What a cute story. I enjoyed it even though there was really very little TG. Sometimes it is a high price to be responsible for your family. A big question is how did his daughter Bethany react? I think that should have been addressed. Once she adjusted there could have been some really cute scenes there. Thanks for a short story that was really fun.

Hugs,

Kristi
Comment by Fret Pearson on 05/04/02
I don't usually read G-rated stories, but I'm glad I did in this case.  The story was interesting but what really made it worth reading was the hilarious line: "I always thought the Shibojin priestesses were real. Now I know."
Comment by Fret Pearson on 05/04/02
I don't usually read G-rated stories, but I'm glad I did in this case.  The story was interesting but what really made it worth reading was the hilarious line: "I always thought the Shibojin priestesses were real. Now I know."  That really cracked me up.


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