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Comment by thisisme on 07/04/13
Normally I would complain about a story being unfinished but this story so obviously is not meant to be finished. It is too bad there is no explanation as to why him. Inquisitive minds want to know. Comment by julielj on 03/25/10 greAT STORY Comment by juliej on 06/15/08 scary bur brilliant i can imagine what it felt like more please Comment by Yoron on 05/29/08 Very scary. Comment by juliej on 02/25/08 more please brillint story Comment by juliej on 11/18/07 brilliant story more please this could go further than it has Comment by cannibble on 07/16/07 in a word.... EXCELLENT Comment by juliej on 01/21/07 again i have reread this story again its brilliant but we need more of it to make a lot more sence as to how why what were &what is going to happen next otherwise a brilliant story more please this story needs to be completed nnot with us wondering from the question above Comment by juliej on 05/09/06 I have re read this story its brilliant but i feel this needs more work to make more innteresting this i feel also needs a lot more explanation how why did he get out of the room or was he locked in what was the future plan for him was this permanant Or had he been set up by soeone in a revenge attack great story trhough but needs to be a lot longer for the full benifits was the person going to take him all the stage through to a woman from a girl baby to toddler to teenager etc why did the woman not say anything or was it just a fantasy Comment by TERRY on 04/27/05 A MOST IMAGINATIVE STORY Comment by juliej on 11/18/04 this was a good story but to short no explanation as to why it happend and what was going to happen is it revewnge or just some other reason what a way to go this was thought out well but was to short Comment by Ami Lamida on 01/13/03 I would also like to see some kind of context for the snippet you presented. Overall, you are a good writer and have some interesting ideas, but they need to be developed and expanded. Also, you need to watch possible inconsistencies. Putting on jeans with locked-on high heels would be difficult to say the least, but you glossed over it. Comment by Nellie D on 01/12/03 This feels more like the middle of a story. There is nothing to bring the reader into it and no ending, it just stops. What caused this to happen??? What happens once he leaves the appartment?? It leaves the reader with as many questions unanswered as the author infers the main character has. The glimpse the author shares is well done within the disclaimer at the beginning. |
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