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Medical Improvisations
by Amanda Walker

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Comment by Kristi Lynne Fitzpatrick on 10/13/13
Rereading this about ten years later I am glad to say it is still fun for a short lark about.  So much more material here, but very good short very nice and well written.

Comment by Silvia. on 06/13/10
Great story. I loved it!
Silvia.

Comment by Bruce on 10/18/09
nice start but since this was written 10 yrs ago i guess we will never see the ending

Comment by Me on 07/27/08
The author writes:

>>He undressed down to his underwear and stood before her. "Oh yes" she said "I think we can do something with you. Will you do everything I say?"

If there is anything to be taken away from these stories, it is to not give carte blanche to one of these schemers.


Comment by carla michelle on 06/15/08
cute story

Comment by Janice on 04/04/07
Very lovely story, would like to see another about how Davina/David works out later and if she/he becomes a fully qualified nurse.

Comment by Andreas on 03/28/07
Hello from Germany!
Dear friends, I have read many stories and many have laughed. The stories are very funny. Man or boy changes into a girl. I have seen men very much making these to something like that. These look so funny like robber barons. Why you do not preserve story about a girl that changes into a boy.
Girl sticks herself up on legs hair. Not smells like a boy wash with that. Shed hairs very tousledly laugh.
You really are poor dreamer-wake up ...

Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/17/04
Far fecthed yes but lots of fun

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/16/02
This is quite a story. I wonder just how many of these types situations actually occur in real life. I did like it though.

Barb

Comment by Deedee Clark on 06/17/02
Cute, I like all of your stories.

Comment by Deedee Clark on 06/17/02
Cute, I like all of your stories.

Comment by Paula Mortenson on 06/17/01
Loved the story.

Comment by Petra Jane on 01/07/01
Excellent!

Really enjoyed the whole thing, great dressing up too. No overtly sexual bits which can be a turn off twixt two men so very well done!

Great story too!



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