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Melissa
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Maid Millie on 12/11/09
I love this story. I wish more husbands would become maids for
their wives I enjoy housework and ejoy wearing my pinafore apron to protect my uniform. I like to be controled by my wife and be submisive sissy. My wife buys me many aprons and uniforms. I get ver excited each day, when I put on my uniform.
Love maid millie

Comment by Silvia. on 10/24/09
Bad, bad, bad, bad story.
I didn't like!
Silvia.

Comment by Michelle on 02/07/08
Jim being spanked by the maid reminded me of my experience when my wife caught me in her clothes. She gave me the spanking of my life and kept me in maid dresses for three months. If my work didn't meet her standards, I received another spanking plus another week of maid service.

After I had served my time, I found that being a maid for my wife was good for me, so I put on my maid uniform and asked for more maid work. My wife loves having a maid, and she shows her appreciation.


Comment by julie j on 09/15/04
the story was great as usual a diffent type of husband is jim he will go some of the way but not all the time i agree with another comment that it would have to be sorted out unless you both compromise to your agreement i disagree with the common assuault caused by martha that is going to far at least they compromised at the end but it was a great story more praise than ever well done more reading still to be done

Comment by Early June on 07/23/04
If I were male, and if I were Jim, I would not have told her in advance about the trip to the attorney.  In fact, I would have the police arrest Martha for assault and escort me and my business necessities to a safe place until final arrangements are made.  He was correct, the love was one sided.  She divorced him. No, she killed him, with the belt, silicon breasts, and banishment to another room.  There is no excuse for anyone to treat anyone like that.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 07/12/04
Lovely story, very well told.  Fine as is, but if you decide to refine it, flesh out the motivations for the Martha character a bit more.  A maid who just needed help would never take that kind of a chance with the master -- unless she could psychologically blackmail Jim because she caught him wearing her clothes or something.  

Jim's and Mary's backgrounds played out nicely, and the resolution was nearly perfect.  I'd love to see you rework this because it has the makings of a classic.  Also, we need to know more about Martha's relationship with Mary.

Love & Huggz,
Sheryl S.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/11/04
At the begining he was weak but in the end he show steel was it the woman inside doing that.Lovely story

Comment by Paula on 07/10/04
Amazing in how many stories like this the male charater like Jim is so spinless to let them be forced into such a thing.  If they secretly wanted to do it and embarrassed about it would of been an interesting twist. Just for a reading it was a amusing fun story.



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