More of Melissa, please

This one kind of left me hanging, but I enjoyed it a lot anyhow.  It is a good piece of fantasy and I can't wait to see more if you choose to continue with this storyline.

Love ya Ducks!

I LIKED THE STORY SORT OF. BUT I HOPE THAT YOU DO HAVE HER CONTINUE SCHOOL, WAS THERE A STORY BEFORE THIS ON HOW SHE CHANGED. GOOD FICTION.

OK! Where is the rest of this story as got a great start that needs to be continued to some kind of completion. You've made her a possible future star and just drop us!  Thks!  Richard

    Very nice Karen Anne!  Really enjoyed the ride that Melissa is on.  Excellent touch starting the story on her first day at school as a girl and racing along with so many happenings. Her Mom is excellent if a little too lenient with her dating older men.  So supportive. :) Melissa Goes To School has an almost rollercoaster feel.  Slow it is not, and I like that.  Good technical writing skills and a nice flow to your tale help significantly. A very fun tale also with realistic fears and some really good loving and supportive friends. There isn't much better in life than a good friend is there?  Melissa's life looks like it is about to explode with positive happenings or are there bumps in the road? Please don't keep us waitng toooooo loooong. Your story seems fresh and original to me, even though the basic plot line is well worn.  Had to get a TG maid in the story somehow didn't you? Thank you so much for a lovely story!  Kristi

Wow! Melissa must be ascending the starway to heaven! The storyline is jam-packed with feel good dreams come true.

Hey Karen,
Does Melissa have any free will here ?  Her first day of school and someone just says "join the cheerleaders"... so she joins. Now you have her out with Tina getting a multi million dollar recording contract.. Did anyone even bother to ask her if she wanted to do this?  Especially coming on top of dinner the night before... having her shrink show up at her friends house.. C'mon.. give us a little reality check here, please?  

I love the story but would like to see Mel actually make a free will choice.

A good story that could use a little polishing. A few snags in the form of odd wording or wrong word used. It has the feel of the beginning chapter of a much longer story.

Ok Karen... That was a wonderful first chapter... Where is the rest? You left lots of nice little holes to fill up with nice little future chapters... grrr... really, where's the rest...

I wanna see more Melissa!!!!