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Melissa Meets Her Daddy
by Melissa

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Comment by sophie on 06/07/16
what happens next affter part 2 i want more stories

Comment by only for 5 dollars on 09/13/13
h6YfZ0 Thanks for the article.Really looking forward to read more. Will read on...

Comment by Eric on 06/19/11
I hope you start on the rest its so good

Comment by sammi swallows on 12/05/07
I can't wait for number three :):) this is one of my fav stories ever!

Comment by alyssa on 11/29/07
I think it was very sexual and weird but its ok. keep up the good job where waiting for #3. yay!
and elaine that was very rud of you so what if she messed up on editing and stuff the real thing is that she impowerd her story really good and persavive. very good job

Comment by Dawn on 08/12/07
Such a beautiful story...and so well told. Any yes, please add to what you have started...soon, please.  I am looking forward to it, and more of your excellent story telling.  Thank you.

Comment by Elaine on 04/04/03
This story was posted originally on FM and it contains many mistakes
eg use of A instead of " in this version. The paragraphs are too long and need editting. the story itself isnt exceptional

Comment by Gingerfred Man on 04/03/03
Wow!  Very erotic and very naughty.  You nailed a lot of fantasies and did it very well.  I hope to see more stories from you.



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