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Melissa's Diary
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Alejandra on 09/29/12
I love it!!! It's such a sweet and slightly sad story.

With love,
Alejandra
P.S.  I'll read more if you write more


Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 02/13/09
WOW! What story! Great, I loved it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by christi on 08/23/07
Dear Jennifer thank you for this enjoyable story it had enough twist's and turns to keep my interest and I was almost burned by the warmth of the love that flowed from the story I was saddened by Melissa's  death  but cryed at her rebirth
Great story
yours lovingly
Christi

Comment by juliej on 12/29/04
another very good story not forced but a young man willing to help his uncle&aunt and become the daughter they missed what a story if only it was me but no luck still a great story

Comment by Ashley on 06/10/03
I loved it...  Finnally one that leaves you with that good fealing! Keep up your writing and I will keep reading it!  Thanks so much! :)

Comment by Pervette on 06/10/03
It always takes a bit of suspension of disbelief when a man passes
so effortlessly & flawlessly & when (s)he acquiesces in his/her new
role so easily. But in this case, it was well worth it. A
delightful story.
.
--Pervy

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 06/10/03
A very sweet tale that proves not all transitions need be forced or punitive.



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