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jmnIFA Now I am ready to do my breakfast, afterward having my breakfast coming yet again to read other news. Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19 Bb6k6S Thanks for sharing this great piece. Very inspiring! (as always, btw) Comment by me suba on 12/20/18 ELvXh6 You certainly put a fresh spin on a subject that has been discussed for years. Comment by jeremy abrams on 05/15/17 dSBh5K Major thanks for the article post.Thanks Again. Cool. Comment by Annabelle on 10/29/06 It's simple which is good, but still could have used a little more detail. Comment by juliej on 11/10/04 the context of the story are brilliant another case of the male getting his wishes &preparing to pay for it at the end well written Comment by Rachel Rae on 04/24/04 I like the brevity of your stories and the specific situations. But could you write in a little bit more detail. Luv Rachel Rae My nom de plume is just plain Rachel and I have stories in Storysite Comment by Erica on 04/16/04 Actually this series is pretty boring. Im not sure what kind of writing style is being used here. These short stories are done before they start. I really hope this writer starts to write in more detail and expands on the story some. As far as teasing the reader...wow Paul...thats an overstatement. How could you possibly look at any of these stories as a teaser to the next? Comment by Ami Lamida on 04/11/03 Well, obviously not a prolific writer based on the first two chapters (grand total of 8k??), but I suppose that is how we all get started. You have a good eye for an erotic situation. Now you just need to fill in the details. Bring us into the scene - describe everything. Tell us a little more about your characters. Where do they come from? What are they feeling? I'm not saying add gristle just to fill in the story - but add in a little more meat. Comment by Pam on 04/10/03 Can't wait to see the next chapter Comment by paul on 04/10/03 Oh you teaser you.You could have gone alittle further but I'm a patient person and will look forward to the next install Comment by Pete on 04/10/03 Get into it. Thanks for a story. I look forward to the next part |
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