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The Mermaid and the Dagger
by Shalimar

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/25/12
Very, very godd story!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Jade on 04/28/07
This was not something that I thought it would be and maybe it would have been nicer to have it explain how he moved to accept the change faster then most.  And even maybe having a little more girl on girl action but other then that this was a wonderful story thank you for it.



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