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Michael
by Stephanie Ann Chavez

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Comment by Stephanie Willow on 01/07/11
The nicest,sexiest,most well written story I've read on Storysite so far.I applaud your skills as a writer of short stories in this genre.Have you published any novels of a similar nature,if so I would be in the market to purchase them.Please may we have more.Thankyou,love Stephanie   XXX

Comment by Sandianne on 03/17/09
  A marvelous story!  I was able to put myself in Michael's place.  His emotions and progression of discovery about himself rang true.
You have written a quality work.  You have the ability to create believeable people that stay true to their created identities.
  Reading this story was like having a dream become real.  Thank you, Stephanie Ann!


Sandianne


Comment by Dick Dunham on 07/26/06
I love your story.  It is a good forced feminization concept.  I have some stories on this site also (The Panty Trap).  I would like to use your Dr. character and hypnosis for a new story.  E mail me if it is O.K.  Dick Dunham

Comment by Fiona Lee on 10/29/01
Nice story, keep up the good work.  Women like you keep me sane.

love

Fi.

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 06/26/01
I found this to be a delightful story, so believable too. I applaud the way you treated it.What an adventure for this lucky couple. their love and their marriage survived, no, more than that it was enhanced by their experience. This did so very much appeal to the romantic in me.You certainly have talent and just like Oliver Twist I am asking for more.......please.

Comment by Patricia Marie Allen on 02/08/01
Hi Stephanie:  

I don't usually read hypnotized, magic and such stories but for some reason I decided to give this one a try.  I was pleased to see the way you handled it.  As an author, I often think about just where I'd take the story as I read.  You chose a path quite close to where I'd have gone.  ...  ...

Congratulation on the realism in the ending.  I know, as I'm sure most people do, that hypnotic suggestions wear off in about two weeks time.  So the only logical end was where you went.  I love it that his wife was so much OK with it.  ...  ...

Keep up the good work.

Comment by Rachael Anne on 01/11/01
Hi Steph...I love your story.  It is acutally very sweet and romantic.  Michael is a lucky guy...!  Good luck.  
Rachael

Comment by Nellie D on 01/11/01
I also read this a short while ago and seem to remember it being quite good.

Comment by Starhawk on 01/11/01
Stephanie,

I loved this story.  I hope you will continue with more of Michael's adventures.  You have true talent.

Starhawk

Comment by HB on 01/11/01
Hi Stephanie: I do hope you will continue writing more stories like Michael. I do believe most of us are exactly like him, and you express our feelings quite nicely! If this is your first effort, I congratulate you on a really nice piece of fiction!! Go girl!!

Comment by Paul jutras on 01/11/01
I read this story a little while ago and enjoyed it as much now as then.

Comment by Rita Mondray on 01/11/01
I read this story a few weeks ago when it was posted to Fictionmania and found it very enjoyable! I hope to read more in future from this excellent author! Keep up the good work Stephanie!

Rita



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