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Michele and the Predator
by Michele Nylons

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Comment by Kim Cummings on 06/23/14
Hardcore and perverted. The transvestite bitch loved every second of the debasement. The cocksucking whore needed to to ass fucked and loved the feeling of the preditor trannie doing it to her.
Comment by Rudi on 02/23/10
Michelle is no heroine.  Not the ending I hoped for.
Comment by Angela E. on 08/24/07
This was a great story.My clitty was hard from the start.God Michelle,yor stories always leave me craving cock so bad I can't stand it.Keep it up!!!!!
Comment by Dani A on 01/05/07
Davey and Michelle "WOW" what a great luv story. She was really a lucky girl. Luv Dani A.
Comment by willette on 10/20/06
i loved the outfits makeup forced to obey  looking forward to reading more adventures
Comment by jill on 10/01/06
I LOVE the story with the predator! I think it is so exciting. I wonder how I would react to everything that happened.

Keep it up Michele!!!

Comment by Annette Seven on 09/29/06
It's interesting though linking TV and criminality is probably not going to be too popular round here.
Are we meant to think Michele is responsible for any of her actions or is The Predator solely to blame?
Is it acceptable for Michele to hurt the victims in part 5 because she was hurt earlier, or shouldn't we think of them as real people?
It kept me reading.
Comment by Dude on 07/19/06
Excellent.

I can't wait to find out what "pleasures" the predator has in store for this helpless bound and gagged tranny.....
Comment by A friend on 04/12/06
Sorry, but this was so violent as to be gross.  I know it's fantasy, but this is a crime of violance made up to be a...

I'll stop now.

I hated this.


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