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Michelleica and The Witch
by Karen Anne Summerfield

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Comment by Johnie on 10/25/12
This is just the perfect asnewr for all of us

Comment by Voncile on 09/20/11
Wheevor edits and publishes these articles really knows what they're doing.

Comment by Maid Joy on 08/31/08
I truly enjoy bodyswap/magic stories.  Thank you for this, it was above average.

Comment by Annie O on 06/16/01
Ah, really nice! One thing, though: males are also witches, not warlocks! And: an it harm none, do as ye will. But, since this is fantasy, go to it girl!  
   

Comment by Nellie D on 06/06/01
A cute short story about a body swap where the witch causing it doesn't think through all the details. The writing is good with enough detail to make the scenes clear.



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