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sfPJdy You are so cool! I don at suppose I ave read through a single thing like this

q6jXQ7 Enjoyed every bit of your article post.Thanks Again. Much obliged.

the last two parts were very interesting &i have no cause for any comments its was a sweet &intersting story wellldone

parts 2-4 again it has the good makings of a story that can twist either way its very interesting and apart from a few minor spelling mistakes seems to be going alone the right lines it will be interesting on to how this will progress it needs some more forcable parts

so far an intersting story part 1 a bit to slow to start with but its there its very good will comment further after reading more parts

Lovely story.  I can vividly recall my first experience in trying to buy a bra and being told, "Honey, you just don't buy a bra by giving me your chest size."  I beat a hasty retreat and called a member of the support group who gave me the address of a sympathetic lingerie owner who measured me and set me straight.  I loved the bra and panty set she picked out for me - gave my minisculed breasts a slight lift and a squeeze from the sides.  It was smallish but I just loved peering down the length of my own cleavage.  Looking forward to your next submission.

A very delightful story, getting better & better.  Just one little grumble...it would have taken less than 30 seconds with a dictionary to verify that the drink is spelled champagne, not champaign, and that it doesn't need to be capitalized.  Does it matter?  Well, the word appears six times in three paragraphs, and the repeated misspellings are a bit like the Chinese water torture.
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Besides, such a good story is worthy of careful editing.
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--Pervette

    This story is exquisite so far.  Very touching and sensual.  What  a great start! Keep up the good work

Lovely, lovely story line. I am so jealous and wish that I was living this story! Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Fabulous story! I have written very similiar stories that I have not posted yet, unfortunately mine are mostly fiction while yours seems to be a real experience. You have to be the luckiest girl in the world, I'm so envious. I can't wait for part 3. Thanx, Sissi Rikki

Lovely vignette of a beautiful transformation.  Michelle Rose is indeed fortunate to have a wife whose fantasies so nicely coincide with his/her own.

As others have said, this begs to be turned into a full blown story with detailed scenes from the 2 week holiday of Kimberly and Michelle Rose.

Keep up the good work.

SS

Just loved this story very sweet feminine and nice oh I know he /she will be most happy

Well, that is indeed truly breath-taking!

I don't recall ever reading of a dominatrix so gentle and downright nice as Stephanie. Is this the first step onto a long downward trail to ignominious slavery or its very opposite, a surprise, fulfilling experience with a loving mistress? (And oh, how many different ways that wording "loving" can be interpreted!)

Whatever comes next surely is bound to be worth the wait.

utterly exquisite -- lustrous detail -- makes my mouth water and my heart sing and my own quivers with anticipation of reading the next chapter.  Thank you for sharing this magnificent prelude with us.

Huggles.