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Michelle's Weekend
by Samantha Kimberly Thorne

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Comment by Joan on 12/13/11
Stay ifnoraimtve, San Diego, yeah boy!
Comment by patty on 03/20/10
Hope that the story can continue on
Comment by Samantha Thorne on 02/10/07
Thanks for the comments, part two of Michelle's Weekend has been submitted.  Keep checking.
Comment by Pat on 02/01/07
I loved the story and keep coming back to SKT's page hoping to find another chapter or sequel.  So far my only solace has been reading the story again.  Of course I imagine being Michelle and love how he is coping with things spinning out of his control.  Lisa seems heaven sent both sensually and common sensibly.  Again, I keep hoping for more please.
Comment by Matthew on 03/17/06
Nice Story enjoyed reading it ....I hope that Michelle & Lisa can get to gether again sometime soon.
Comment by leah on 11/24/04
A very quiet, plausible vignette. Perhaps the party was overly understated (Can I say that?), because I'm sure that some of Michelle's encounters were worthy of recall -- the shy Tommy, for instance, a trip to the bathroom, beverages, shoes and clothing holding up -- a whole host of possibilities.

Maybe next time, but of course we'll also be interested in what kind of a girl Michelle mangages to be, and what kind of girl Lisa actually is. This gentle slice of life seems worthy of a follow up -- maybe one for each of the two days remaining of the weekend.
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