What a beautie!! Ioanna, she ablueotsly stunning and I am so happy I got to meet her in person. Yianni, again, you have done an amazing job. You have captured wonderful family moments. Good luck with beba's baptism

for this story a few small mistakes are easily overlooked(i used to a teacher)the emotions were shared to the reader and was a very well crafted work,,,many thanks and keep up the good work

You know it's ashame that the people who comment on stories aren't required to register.  That way you could communicate directly with them.  Molly appears to be annoyed by my writing and I'd love to tell her/him that if it bothers her that much she/he should stop reading them.

I wrote these stories for my own enjoyment and decided to share them with others.  But, with her/his mundane and repetitive comments it makes me wonder if he/she has a life.

Teddie

Uhm, a minor annoyance, but a growing irritation:

"your" = 2nd person possessive: "Your breasts and my breasts."

"you're" = contraction of "you are": "First, you're passable."

At least you're consistent, but it is becoming increasingly annoying to keep running into stuff like "First, your passable."

Please, please keep up the good writing.  
You are great.  You make a person feel like they were in the story.

Teddie, you are a great storyteller.

What a refreshing change!  Great stories, well written and well researched.  Highly enjoyable and (best of all) superb plots.  Thank you very much.

Teddie,
      I am not so concerned about any mistakes that their may be. You write great very believable stories. The sex in them is well written and not really pornographic, as in Terrie's Change or Whats taking so long. And now for a female Japanese James Bond, it just gets better. Incidentally I thought it was Arigato.

Hi,

Part 4 is in the works.  Be patient.

Teddie

Dear Teddie:

Every bit as wonderful and charming as the first two installments.  The characters and life are so real and feel so genuine.  The detailing is perfect and the dialogue is adorable.  {One minor factoid-FYI: there is no Hershey Exit off I-95, since it passes some 2-1/2 hours east of where Hershey is.  From DC, you would take route 83 North which is almost a straight shot. No matter, your description of the Hotel Hershey, one of the truly great old hotels was spot-on.} And, you used all your locales to perfection.  I really love the loving relationships hitting just the right notes.  Please don't stop here.  I need to know who the other two people at the party are.

Love & Huggs,
Sheryl S.

Wow!  I didn't think you could top the first installment, but this is even more lovely.  Congratulations on a truly moving story with terrific characters.

Love & Huggles,
Sheryl S.

Dear Teddie:

I always LOVE your stories, but this one touches me everywhere I need to be touched.  I have a cousin who has a Japanese wife, and I once was in Osaka (where she is from) with them, and you caught the flavor very well.  I loved the touch about the father being a cross-dresser.  You probably know that two clinical studies have posited that Japan has the second highest incidence of crossdressing in the population of any nation, UK being first.  Anyway, I digress.

Just loved the story -- and can hardly wait until the next chapter.  What a great way to start the weekend!!

Love & Huggles,
Sheryl S.