I wonder how smug Miss Jones Miss Wilkins Susan and Trudy were after Mike got his revenge by pouring battery acid on the bitches faces?

Read this again and must say it one of the nicest "petticoat punishment" stories. Also quite believable. Some how I got the feeling that Michael wasn't really that much a bully, but rather a lonely boy trying to impress others by being "strong bad boy". I wonder if he and Trudy became friends and perhaps ...?

Just wish Jennifer would write more - perhaps in Big Closet.

as per my previous comments

Parts of this made my stomach churn.

a great story at my 2nd reading well done

a good story its very difficult to be smpethetic we mike was a nasty piece of work as well as a bully i wish it was me but still a great story a sequel to this would be very intresting it would not take to much for mike to go back to his old ways and this carried on by his mother welldone

Hi everybody. This is Jennifer. Thanks for your kind comments so far, but since so many are mentioning the point about Mike's short hair, I should add that in England in the 1950's we wore our hair longer than boys in the States. Crew cuts were unknown, except on the heads of U.S. military personnel stationed over here. My hair was of typical boy's length, and on more than one occasion I had ribbons tied in my hair when participating in plays at school as a girl when we couldn't afford to hire wigs.

Just thought I'd explain.

A sequel with Mike caught in panties would be interesting.
 Having lived through the 50's, long hair would be a no-no in the States. The Beatles didn't have long hair, and longhair music certainly wasn't popular with the younger set.
 Other than that, a very realistic idea.

Great story if that was me I would never of gone back to trousers

The valid point about the length of Mike's hair probably can be solved by placing this story in the 1960s, where boys' hair often was allowed to grow quite long and much of the restraint and maturity seen in these children was still in evidence. Have a feeling that this wouldn't work well in the 21st century --- unless Mike were a mere seven or eight years old. (Oh, yes, there are hellions at that age, too!)

What?!? Mike didn't fall in love with the neat skirts or the swishy knickers (or that awful hat)? How novel these days -- just a lesson, not a transformation. How refreshing!

Very well done and I salute you on a believable tale! As Jezzi said, in the 50's (I know that time well.) a boy's hair would not reach his neck! Tight and high were the dress code policies back then for boy's hair. Other than that a truly delightful tale!

Huggles
Angel

I thought this to be the most realistic petticoat punishment story I've read.  If it was unrealistic at all, it was in the remarkably mature restraint exercised by the girls.  One nit pic was his long hair, which wouldn't be probable in the '50's.