I would love to read the prequel ,which would tell us in better detail how Mike ?Lisa got to this point .
 I am waiting also for chapter 2 where Tina gets her comeuppance .
I really enjoyed the story and your style of writing ....I am off to one of your other stories published here .
                              Affectionately
                              Stephen J

Good story!  I hope the rest or at least part two is soon to be coming!?  It talkes off a little differently which I  find intriguing. I find it sort of refreshing after reading so many stories that seem to start basically all in the same manner so this one caught my attention being somewhat different.

Keep writing.

                     Vivien

Dear Danielle: Good story! I am glad that even though Mike/Lisa had been ill treated and wanted revenge, he/she finally realized that no one should be punished unless they really are guilty. Plot point question: Unless I missed something we do not learn manager Tina's fate. What eventually happened to her-- or did you just mean to leave that situation open. It would have been interesting to read a little more about Mike/Lisa's adjustment to his/her new status. But at least you did reveal how that status came about in bits and pieces throughout the story.  I look forward to reading more of your work.
Peace-- hippie cheerleader.    

I would think this would be a lot better as part 2 of a multipart story as it actually starts in the middle with little background information.  Still it is an interesting and enjoyable read. Thanks for writing and submitting it.