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Mike Was Right
by Tytus

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Comment by Peggy Sue on 09/17/08
I liked the sweet story very much. It's fine by me that some of it was too quick to be possible. The tyranny of the possible keeps many of us away from our best fantasies.

Comment by Jackie Rose on 01/03/06
Hate to repeat everyone, but it really was very sweet.  It was also a very sexy story.  Well done.
Kisses

Comment by Cassandra on 08/10/03
I want to agree with Pervy, yet I found that the necessary groundwork had been laid. It may have been a little quick, but not enough so to disrupt the story line. I would suggest to Pervy, and hope she responds to me directly, to read the hints and suggestions of the author as Patrick comes to grips with herself. Her mom certainly knew and Ms. Garner did also. Things happen sometime quicker than one would suspect. The story was really good. I loved it and would like to read more from the authoress.

Comment by Pervette on 08/09/03
I thought Patrick's transformation went a little too swiftly &
easily to be believed. But otherwise...yes, I agree with the others
--a sweet story!  Pity real life couldn't flow as smoothly as
this.
.
--Pervy

Comment by Cassandra on 08/09/03
I was totally enchanted by this story. The twist at the ending was really exciting and totally unexpected. I could hardly restrain myself from laughing at Miss Garner and then Mike. All in all a totally wonderful story.

Comment by Karen E. Lea on 08/09/03
A sweet story, a surprise ending, after sharing so much, it was hard to imagine them apart.

Comment by Tanya Lynn on 08/09/03
sweet story, bit of a surprise ending, which i liked.



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