There should be an unrealistic tag to use on the stories that don't quite fit in the magic, sci-fi and body swapping categories. 'Every woman is an evil genius and every guy is a dolt'. I'm tired of running into that mantra unabated by tags that don't exist.

So all that bluster about understanding what they go through went straight out the window when she showed him the maids outfit! I mean was she wearing the outfit or anything like it? I think not. Logic, use logic.

a heavy story but a set up that had been planned for a long term what a way to go

Fun but mad

I like your stories so much, I put them ahead og the others in the "yo read" queue.  This one is well written and holds interest, but it has a very unhappy ending.  If Al wasn't warned by his friends, especially after the two evil, or just plain vile, women have corrupted his mind and body,  perhaps they will help to set things right, somewhere away from the two abusers.  At least Al doesn't have to worry about losing the love of his life, she is already gone.  How do these two figure he is going to be effective at work being messed up as he is.  And what will hapen when the money stops coming in?  They are so consumed with the details of their own petty little world, they completely ignore the ten hour days Al was putting in to provide the niceties for them.  What's next?  Now that they have destroyed Al, are they going to recruit another male to provide for them?  How long will it take for them to destroy him too?
 I like the story, even id I do not like its xonxlusion. You write well ans provide enjoyable respites, usually.  
thank you for sharing with us.

I justlove reading that which you right. I enjoyed the story and the surprise to Al that he had already began his transformation long before that day whenhe was introduced to female attire.  Tricia is the Villian not Nadine, Nadine is the accomplce. Over all I loved the way it came together. This story has the opportunity to have a part two.

sad story about about a sadistic lying mother in law