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Milkshake and Chocolate Cake
by Cleo Girlie

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
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Comment by suba bob on 11/26/16
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Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
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Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14
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Comment by Silvia. on 08/19/11
That's ok.

Comment by jeannette on 01/17/09
Very good short story! Love, "jeannette"

Comment by juliej on 01/20/06
the tail is tooshort &it did not seem to get the effect over not bad though

Comment by solon on 06/14/04
quite an affecting little tale....and it's true about love for older women when we were youngsters...though i never thought of it before. this story could have been edited, a bit more, but im just a mean old critical mood!

Comment by A Reader on 03/12/04
More details please... I enjoyed the story but I long for more details.

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 01/26/04
Wonderful first effort! Short and sweet, easy read and leaving me wanting more.


Comment by Kimmie on 01/26/04
A very nice sweet story cleo ,that I found very enjoyable. thank you -huggsees

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/25/04
Very sweet, a gentle push onto the pink brick road!  

I would have liked more hair details; did he get a roller set?  If so, how did it feel?  etc.  I also wondered about after the glow wore off.  Was the style convertible to a boy's style?  If not, what happened next?  The next day? etc.

Comment by liza on 01/25/04
thats just the way I like a TG story-- sweet, yet overpowering the mainperson slowly, but surely to the world of feminity.. Lovely

keep on

Comment by leah on 01/25/04
I didn't believe it for a minute, but it is a cute story. I appreciated the good-natured humor throughout.

Comment by JillMI on 01/25/04
Sweet. Believable. Quite good for a first effort.

Comment by jimmyinwhite on 01/25/04
i like the idea behind this story but it didn't flow as smovely as it could have. please keep keep on writing. i think you you'll get better with each story you write.

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