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Mind Your Manners
by Jennifer White

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Comment by juliej on 02/24/06
it was again a very interesting story well worth continuing very in depth and well written

Comment by Elizabeth on 01/04/06
It's fiction everybody - and it is very, very good fiction.

Thank you.


Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/02/06
<<  Terri smiled. She had the perfect husband now. All thanks to Ayla.  >>

No she doesn't.  She has a shemale maid named Chantel who, as far as she herself knows, was brought up as a girl.  Terri and Ayla killed her husband.  more murders.

Comment by a guy on 01/02/06

femdom.  a rude rough guy is destroyed, only chantel is left.  she is semi-sucidal in a male bady.  and the wifey is PLEASED; this is someone she can dominate and make over.  

there is no love, no caring.



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