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Mirror, Mirror
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Mandee on 12/02/07
Hi Jennifer,
  I read all your updates and I must say you are sooo... prolific a writer.  I enjoyed this story very much although I resent forced femme where the male character is such a quality individual-even from the 4th dimension behind a mirror.  It seems so unfair and unjust.
  Nevertheless- it is the Twilight Zone and thus all is ok.
Thank you for the skilled writing darling.
Hugs
Mandee

Comment by jrepg on 07/19/07
I've been a big fan of your work (sorry for the lack of comments), and I just wanted to say I found this one particularly good.  I often check Story Site just for your updates.

Thanks for all the stories,
~jrepg

PS: I'm also quite fond of Ravenous Desires and Thinking With Your Tits to name just a couple more I should have commented on.


Comment by stuff on 07/17/07
good transitions-very creative.  Good inclusion of some of the "disads" of feminity. -Those details are good. detailed psychological changes are good as well--  



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