Angel O'hare.
It doesn't matter, if it is fiction or not, and yes, I like good stories.
I don't like your stories, even if they are fiction or not.
You write bad stories, and I don't like them.
I wish you would change your way of writing.
Silvia.

Silvia, this is what is called FICTION! Do you know what the definition of FICTION is Sylvia?

If you want the feel good stories and those that have not a hint of "bad" things in them read stories written by Barbara Lynn Terry.

She's is a wonderful author and is the Queen of the Sweet and Sentimental genre.

This story is a shame.
I would like to know if any mother, or even you, would do that with your own child.
I don't think so!
Shame on you!
Silvia.

lovley story when are you going to finsh it i hop all go's well for kim did she ever find out wot the dr was up to before it was two late

thnk you
harry

what was the last to comments reading? this is a story and not true life. my only thing i can say is they a part 3 or 4? what happens next? how do she/he get on at school? do his mommy find out about Dr patty and what going to happen to him/her? there so many unanswered questions and it warrent another part. i wait and see.

shut the hell up tryingtounderstand. no one cares what you think. go watch some veggie tales and read your bible. these stories are not for you.

Putting a five year old in diapers in a Catholic school and being forced by his mother and cousins to go through what you wrote is nothing short of being "sick" and is outright child abuse.  You should be ashamed to have degraded your writing to this level.  I wrote a favorable comment on your story about Angel/Rachael, but this one stinks to high heaven and you should be ashamed of yourself.  Doing this to a five year old will warp the childs mind forever and will take the child God given self=esteem away from him.  I am very disappointed and wish you will remove this story from your sight.  Surely with your talent you could do better.  If this is harsh .... sorry it is the way I feel.  Would you truly do this to your child....if so, it would be a crime and should be punished for doing it.

ohhh please tell us more please please please!!

come on most of you authors write good stories and then forget to complete them
it would be appreciated if you finnish it
                 THANK YOU
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  Nicely done you have taken me through all my emotions and started
back through again ... thank you for  your talent and writtings
it is hard to give enough praise to you .... so Bless you for helping us that need to see the world diferently through your eyes..

peace and love will follow you forever  ..... Rone

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Love this story to can not wait to see how it goes for poor Kim.
Am a big fan of your work and would like to see more of it.

Ladycat