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Mission, II
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Anonymous on 07/08/09
Being open psychically is certainly a two-edged sword. This author has trained himself to remember his nonphysical experiences while living in a male physical body.

I more than once felt I was exacting revenge upon someone when I screwed with their head while I was in a nonphysical state. It's not hard to get some people to do anything you think will humiliate them. You can invest so much time and energy and creativity in that delicious revenge.

Well, now it reminds me of a trip to Las Vegas that my spiritual teacher described to me one time. He and his best friend were in Las Vegas and they assumed they were the first to figure out a good thing. They were playing the "pass line" at a craps table and every now and then a sexy waitress would "comp" then an adult beverage. They were losing less than the  price of the drinks, so they were pretty proud of themselves.

The pit boss finally couldn't take their smugness after a few hours, so he asked if they were having fun and enjoying the free drinks. They smiled and assured him they were having a great time. Then the pit boss deflated their balloon by really sticking it to them. He told them that the casino was currently paying shills $7.50 an hour to do what they were doing.

When a nonphysical being "exacts revenge" upon a physical being by helping them to integrate all parts of themselves, they aren't exacting revenge upon the person, they are doing God's work "for free".

It only goes to prove that the House always wins.


Comment by Elayne Beneford on 08/10/05
Hi

I just wanted to say that I love all your stories.

I also wanted to know whether I get a prize for noticing that you have two Mission stories, the one here dated May 7, 2005 and one dated May 8,2004. Coincidence? I think not!

Keep them coming and your loyal readers will keep on reading. Although I must say that I have a gigantic backlog after Crystal added so many in July and August.

Hugs
Elayne

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/08/05
Good horror story.  What an evil woman sarah became!  In the end, she had no qualms at all about stealing another person's life and putting Mark's parents and friends and girlfriend through hell when he "disappeared".  However, the real evil ones in this story are the women in white who called Sarah into Mark's body.  She didn't seem evil or selfish when she was a spirit looking out for her own child.  they called her and put her in a live or die position inside Mark ... and the author doesn't even tell us why they did this to them.



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