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Mission Impossible?
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Comment by me suba on 12/20/18
SdcRBo Thank you, I ave just been looking for info about this subject for ages and yours is the best I ave found out till now. But, what in regards to the conclusion? Are you sure about the supply? Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14 vfOt2N Very good article post.Really thank you! Want more. Comment by English Teacher on 08/03/08 I am very impressed with many of your descriptions of plot and cast perhaps in future installments a little more of the changes added to help her apperance could be brought out as well as the additional training mentioned earlier. But otherwise a very good start. Comment by Vivien Tena on 05/20/07 Ohhhhh, please add more to this story,please? I was so hoping that by now you would have added more to it. Comment by rone welles on 04/30/07 Well it has been a long time to be oiled and stared at by two latinos when are we going to see the rest of the story ? Comment by Vivien Tena on 07/15/06 We want more, we want more,we want more! Good story, easy to read and captures my attention. So, when should we expect the rest of the story? Hurry please? Comment by Kaaren Smith on 01/24/06 I Love this story and would hope that you Amber would continue it to completion.----Blessings, Kaaren M. S. Comment by rone on 11/16/05 More bravo more encore encore .....super we need to get on with the mission this is getting exciting nice dance discriptions Comment by Joanna on 08/17/05 At last,, the girl is getting more girly, but how much more? I like the dance club descriptions, everything there, but the smoke. MORE. Comment by Stefan on 12/31/04 I am desperate for more. Please, please continue. Thoroughly enjoyed story so far...... Many thanks. Comment by Amberlyn on 02/15/04 Lynda, Comment by LIDYA on 02/15/04 CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. ONE THING THOUGH, IF AMBER IS SO BEAUTIFUL, HOW DID THAT WOMAN, RALPH'S WIFE, KNOW THAT SHE WAS A HE? Comment by Jane Hudson on 02/11/04 I just love the storys just fab my dear Comment by Jane Hudson on 11/25/03 Love it great story agin a story that show us in a good light feminine yet when need be strong .Keep up the good work Comment by cassandra on 08/19/03 Way to go girl! This story is fun! Keep it coming (cumming?) Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/16/03 Good start! Keep going, or, as they said in the '60's, "write on!" :-) |
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