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Miss Me
by Jennifer White

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Comment by this is me on 07/31/12
This story deserves to be ridiculed simply because the author forgot to use the sci-fi tag so I wouldn't have been subjected to it. I like realism and this isn't. The continual barrage of anti-male propaganda turns my stomach.

Comment by leelee on 04/08/10
Geez I found your page  and more wicked good stories  I liked this at the end when he SHE got a dildo to suck for her food   I imagined that at that point the sweet little girl emerged and would eventually be a beautiful and expert cocksucker!!!  oh how many of us have these fantasies????You write them well!!!   of course since it is just a fantasy the time frame and changes  aren't all that real   Usually it is a two to three year hormone regime to get there but the speed is not important   the effect is  thanks again

Comment by Celeste on 10/11/09
Fabulous. You write good.

Comment by juliej on 04/19/08
as per my previous comments

Comment by julie j on 01/02/05
a wicked but facinating transformation what a brilliant story well written more please,but some with male rebellion

Comment by Gina La VaLampe on 04/23/04
Jennifer, This is a fascinating transformation to imagine. Great story!
Gina

Comment by Paula on 04/18/04
the motives for the change is a bit confusing.  They think being born male is a birth defect but their interested in dating guys.



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