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Miss Victoria's School for Girls
by Abby Rhodes

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Comment by Emmy on 06/02/22
 I'm glad most of the stories I found at Crystal's have been saved. I am sorry that this particular one has not been finished.  At this point in time it probably won't be.  I do hope the author is still in good health and I thank them for what is here.

Comment by truknights on 12/31/18
all boys should have samantha training...boys can not understand women when they become men without sensuality and sexual awareness....whan bam thankyou mam would soon end...abby knows boys...and i appreciate that very much

Comment by crorkservice on 07/18/14
IWG4bN Really enjoyed this article post.Really looking forward to read more. Keep writing.

Comment by chzwiz on 11/07/11
Dear Abby,

Another lovely story, but you need to finish it.


Comment by Bianco on 04/30/10
Section 2 has a remark on 13-year old boys - that they can and will get many more erections and also ejaculations. Even in our times this is an all too little known fact which I appreciate being repeated here.

I bumped into Abby Rhodes stories looking for writers who use grammar and can use the expressiveness of language.


Comment by Helena on 10/24/08
I really liked these stories and wish I could have been Sam.

Comment by cathy angela davis on 07/05/08
the boy was raped by miss blond, the school can get in trouble did you think about that angle? but i would also finish it that Sam becomes girl and goes into her mother's business. as for miss blond she can be blacked mail by Sam, for what she did 14 is too young in our society,

Comment by MST3K (the Kibbitzer) on 05/18/08
In part 2:

>>Brad smiled. 'Five thousand, Samantha.'

>>,' I said.

What would that sound like, if it were spoken aloud?

>>All these women treated us with respect unless we played up or did something bad. The trouble was that if you were hauled up in front of Miss Victoria she was so distressed by having to give you a telling off that she ended up in tears as often as not. You only had to go through that once to change your ways.

BAHAHAHAAHAAHAAHAHAHAHAHA... Yep, guilt is a much more effective tactic than the attempt to instill fear, isn't it?

>>Miss French wore the shortest skirts and had the highest heels you ever saw. Whatever top she had one was sure to have a plunging neckline that showed off a lace bra and/or camisole. She smoked cigarettes in a long cigarette holder and was to be seen leaning against the wall outside the staff room blowing smoke rings. She had long blonde hair and a gold bracelet with links the size of quarters.

Sounds like a walking advertisement for R.J. Reynolds to me.

>>Miss French was a magnet for the older girls and seldom travelled across the campus without three or four of them following her. They tried to imitate her by hitching up their skirts and adopting her carefree poses, some even smoking, until Miss Victoria caught them. Miss French was quite a role model all right.

QED

Did you ever wonder why French is held in such high regard among English speakers? It's a bit of history. After the Norman Conquest (hint: Google is your friend), England had a run of French-speaking Norman kings. French became the official language at court, of course, and Anglo-Saxon, the language of the people, became vulgarized as the commoners' tongue. In particular, four-letter Anglo-Saxon words became...well, four-letter words. How do we know about the Norman Conquest? Someone wove the story into what is known as the Bayeux Tapestry...

>>They also wanted to know why I was seeing Miss Blonde. I told them she was giving me a treatment for a back problem.

Not for a front problem?

In part 3:

>>I had been thinking about my mother quite a lot recently. It was easy to believe she had switched over to the other side. Her commitment to treating me as a girl all my life was a sure sign of something, but this new phase of hiring women for everything indicated to me that she was probably going to announce a full conversion to lesbianism, if she hadn't already made an announcement.

"LesbianISM"... I never thought of the lesbian lifestyle as an ideology before... Hmmm... Radical feminISM, lesbianISM... I believe Abby's got something, here.

>>"Here we are, ladies. My little girl is home from school. This is my Samantha. I'll come round and introduce her to you all. Keep drinking."

Are you sure they need encouragement?

>>There were rings on fingers that could pull shoulders out of their sockets with the size of them

From a finger? Wow. I wish there was an Aikido move that would do that.

>"We will, Madame," said Carol (I think). "We'll take very good care of her. " She was looking at me in a speculative fashion and I couldn't figure out what she had in mind by way of taking very good care of me.

No? (heh heh...)

In part 4:

>>For that reason, a discretion clause has been built into all the contracts so no one will blab unless they want to be jailed for breach of privacy."

That's a new one on me. IANAL, but I don't think that imprisonment is an allowable penalty for a breach of contract.

>>Later that day I called my friend Melissa and arranged to meet at her place in the afternoon for a game of tennis. Melissa was glad to hear from me. We always got along well at Miss Victoria's School and to be quite honest I needed to remove myself from my mother's place to get a little reality.

Reality is the last thing I wold associate with this particular story, which seems to deal with suspension of disbelief by ignoring it altogether.

>>She was explaining about her sex drive when we arrived at Melissa's and how she needed to come to orgasm several times a day or she was unable to sleep.

Wow, and I thought that *I* was addicted...

>>What on earth would I do if Ingrid wanted to have sex with me?

Uhm...enjoy it? It'll be quite a Ride, though. You'll definitely hear Wagner's Die Walküre playing in the background...

>>Not only that, but, as I found out during the game, she was wearing white nylon panties with row upon row of lace across the backside. She said later they used to belong to her mother and she found them very sexy to wear. She grinned at me and I started to wonder if the country air out here affected peoples sex drives. They all seemed to have one thing on their minds.

Women's fashions are about nothing else. That's why we in the Community love them so much. :)


Comment by APB on 10/14/07
Please go back and finish this awesome tale

Comment by Ftygrl on 07/13/07
Abbie,
Please, please go back and finish "Miss Victoria's Finishing School " soon. I eagerly await the further "Miss-adventures " of Samantha and am curious as to what further "developments " she will go through. Will she opt for the operation or stay as she is, will she marry or not ?
Do not keep it perched on the edge of our seat nor in helpless suspense forever.  

Comment by Patti on 06/12/07
This is a wonderful, wonderful story!  What happened to Part 5?

Comment by Lauren on 12/28/04
Love the way the story is developing: can't wait for the coming sequels.  Sam will probably have several "naughty" encounters before the end.

Comment by PMDS on 11/07/04
Excellent stories; definitely want to find out how Samantha develops.

Comment by Anthea on 10/20/04
Beautiful storey and well composed and writen. Please contnue.

Comment by Pippa K. on 10/16/04
Naughty, naughty, naughty, but nice!  Obviously the work of a marvelously fractured mind.  Let's see if you can keep it "up".

Comment by mikie on 10/12/04
I adore what you are writing.  Having a different twist from most stories, I can't predict what comes next, a feature most enjoyable.  Do keep this one going.

Comment by tanyalynn on 10/10/04
a great beginning.  I will be following the story as it progresses.

Comment by Donna Dee on 10/10/04
 Absolutely brilliant - a quite different approach and one that I shall be fascinated to continue reading.  Excellent writing too.



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