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Mistress Alana's Captive
by Brent Mundy

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Comment by spur~* on 11/26/09
Amazing writing!!  I can picture Mistress Alana having a slave's lower ribs either shattered or removed in order to fit the corsets, perhaps even a few sets of ribs.

Keep up the amazing writing!!!

Your fan
spur~*


Comment by furboi on 11/21/09
Another really hot story, what a dream oh now where is mistresses phone number?

Comment by Fursissy on 11/07/09
Great story really enjoyed it, now let me get my furs on.

Comment by D HotKiss on 04/04/09
I left comments on all your stories, but you'll hear no criticism from me.. for me they are perfect..pant pant.. HotKissFetish.ning.com .

Comment by bitchboy micki on 05/30/06
I am so envious! I wish i could find someone like Mistress. Does a Woman like this exist? Put me in that box, please!! I loved this story. I never thought about fur in an erotic way, but i sure will now.



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