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Mistress Dyvia
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Comment by chocopie on 12/20/18
oYnEee Im grateful for the article.Really looking forward to read more. Want more. Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/15/17 r9n5hf You ave made some good points there. I checked on the web to find out more about the issue and found most individuals will go along with your views on this web site. Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/04/14 99rzcV This is one awesome article post.Really thank you! Fantastic. Comment by Juliette Lima on 01/18/05 The one overlooked aspect in the story is it's membership in the horror story genre. A lot of gender change or forced crossdressing stories are "Tales of Terror" just as sure a Stephen King lives in Maine, the protagonist will suffer at the hands of a character with no conscience, or amoral ethics. The main value here is Caveat Emptor. I do not care for users of magic, but I don't interpret the story as having magic employed (the sudden ability to understand French may qualify as magic, I know if I had spoken fluently in Frenc my instuctors would have suspected either magic, or devine intervention). Comment by juliej on 10/12/04 I agree with betty it was a good story to fast for me to keep pace with my french is very poor and it through me i get the gist of this it could have been worked out more but over all an intresting story Comment by betty on 01/13/04 it was very interesting, but i don't think that the transformation to a woman and her sexual desires and wonder of being a woman were explored enough. Comment by Bimbo Mazerati on 11/07/02 I liked the story. It gave an interesting look how we can have control taken from us and just how dominating a woman can be. Its creative to me seeing how a dom hired to help make a couple closer ends up actually making them closer to her own desires. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 11/02/02 An OK first effort, but I think it's a poor domme who can't get her way without resorting to magic, and she's a dishonest businesswoman, too. I think this could have been much better if the magic had been left out and a clash of wills between two stubborn individuals been described. Maybe having Maria come in to break the stalemate and end with a treesome with the domme and sub roles changing back and forth during the course of it. Comment by r on 11/01/02 this story well how do i put it |
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