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Mistress Dyvia's Fun Night with a New Gurl
by Mistress Dyvia

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Comment by juliej on 01/11/08
intersting start but more is needed to enjoy the story more

Comment by jeri on 04/16/07
i thought it was short, cute and exciting.  imagination is great if one put herself in the storyline.  i do wonder what comes next, umh? *s*

Comment by rhiann on 07/12/06
an enjoyable tale - a bit short though.  I look forward to you next story about nina's  (rhiann's) femminazation.

Comment by julie j on 08/07/05
an interesting story of fem dom but at this time to short more needs to be added to make a better&longer story good start



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