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Misty's Campfire Tales
by Misty Dawn

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Comment by Lorelei on 05/11/15
Really nice feminization accounts of a boy's transformation into "Misty".  True, girl's clothes enliven a boy's body like nothing else.

And I hope the kids around the campfire were wearing blouses, bras, soft panties, feminine napkins, micromini pleated skirts, kneesox, and penny loafers - the BEST way to enjoy Smores and Mountian Dew!

Comment by Fan on 04/04/05
This is excellent! Please consider doing a lengthier story based on part 1's premise!
Comment by Early June on 11/18/04
Wow! Two very nice, very sweet tales.  Well written, and holding the reader's interest, even drawing them in.  I thoroughly enjoyed both of theses short, short stories.  I wonder if you might be working up to a lengthier effort.  The only drawback was the editing. Perhaps you could ask Jezzi Belle or Jan to breeze through and wipe out the distractions you don't notice. I would like very much to see more of your talent.  Thank you for sharing with us.
Comment by maggiethekitten on 11/05/04
huggles big sis Misty

A beautiful tale as snuggly warm as the campfire where it all begins.

It is one of the more gentle and well paced stories I have read.  

It's so wonderful to read a story where the transformation takes more than a few paragraphs to happen.  The reader is able to experience every subtle and not so subtle change right along with Billy/Misty.

I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

Soooo...where did you say Misty's momma buys her cocoa?

Giggles

Great job big sis and can't wait to read more.  Four paws up from your kitten little sister.

Comment by julie j on 10/12/04
this was a sweet story very pleasent and enjoyable the writing&explanation was very good i was suprised that he did not notice how things were changing with him its amazing well done a great story
Comment by jillmi on 09/02/04
Your writing has improved greatly.

This was a very sweet story.

There are a few things I would be happy to comment on, if you are interested. Let me know. I would do my edits on MS words comments, if that would work for you.

Jill
Comment by Briar on 07/22/04
I liked this - it was kind and gentle and sweet.  Thank you, Misty.
Comment by RickkiB on 07/21/04
A nice feel good kind of story, that is told in a gentler side of things.  Very good Misty.  You do good work kid.
Comment by Paula on 07/20/04
a lot better and different in a good way than I expected


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