most retarted story i have read in a while. none of it sounde realistic or made sense.

IUZxTu I simply use world wide web for that reason, and get the

  How long has Vickie ever managed to hold on to a boy friend ? Has she ever had a boy friend ?

I realize this is an old old story and like wise the comments.
Don't expect this one will make the rest.
Were I writing the story the ending would have been different,
at about the time returning to the house on the tight turn
there would have been a very sever accident. Paving the way
for the Gentlemen and his newly acquired Women.

Very well written story!  Enjoyed it!

I recently got around to reading this story (who has the time to read such long stories?).  I enjoyed it a lot; well at least the first 3/4ths before Nick/Nicola had the operation and sex with Kevin.  But that’s just my personal preference.  And I did immensely enjoy the part where Nick got off just with nipple stimulation.  It may not be realistic, but it is something I aspire to as well.  Many people don’t realize that breasts/nipples can be an erogenous zone for men as well as women.

As usual the story was extremely well written.  However, I must agree with some of the other critics that it tended to be repetitive of Vickie’s other stories and did not treat males very well.  Well with Vickie you know what you are in for before you start.  In this particular case none of the main characters were likable: Nick was argumentative and arrogant; Kelly mean; Rachel evil and Kevin a tool.  Nor was their motivations easy to understand, even after they espoused them at length.  Guess it was just too dense or Machiavellian for me.

Keep on writing good stories.

SS

Another story of a mans love for his wife twisted be a evil woman. Do all the men in your stories have to so dumb as to not see whats happening to them? this is true in all your stories weman using the love of men have for them to turn them into weman. Why do you have to use love as a weapon of hate. All Nick did was love his wife so much that he let her turn him into not her husband or lover but her pet to do with as she pleases. Sad that you think that all Love is good for.

Vicki,

You have always been my favorite Author but do the men always have to end up as a complete woman? I really enjoy the stories with hormones added by the wife.