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The Mobster and the Model
by Alana

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Comment by Silvia on 05/25/10
BAD.

Comment by jeannette on 01/06/08
Enjoyed the story... & the photos!! Are there places like "Skin Fiction Studio, Street Girl & Spanki"? Please let me know as I would love to have a Photo Shoot there!!! Sorry for other people's (negative) comments!

Comment by jeannette on 11/07/07
I had enjoyed this story,also! Too bad it was not ME as the "cute, little tart"! Keep up the great work! Love ya, jeannette (sybilgordon@bellsouth.net).

Comment by Tonga on 08/24/05
I'd say these stories are less about TG fiction and more about you putting your pictures on the web. Big difference. Do us and you a favor. Write a story and put your pictures for what they're worth some other place on the Web.  That seperates the writers from the pretenders.

Comment by Notennyone on 08/22/05
The story is mediocre at best. The dresses are nice. But as far as your appearance...I'll reserve judgment except to say you're quite the little exhibitionist, aren't you?



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