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The Model and the Cross Dresser
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xUErll I do't regret that spent a few of minutes for reading. Write more often, surely'll come to read something new!.... Comment by Early June on 11/03/04 Another enjoyable tale. Comment by tanyalynn on 10/24/04 I loved the story, but agree with the others- I had the problem early on myself until I got help with dialogue. Please use an editor. Comment by Donna Dee on 10/24/04 Yes, I agree with Pippa - this has the makings of a lovely story but, as she said, you really do need an editor, some of the mistakes are almost unbelieveable. Crystal does have volunteer editors, you can find them in the authors corner. Comment by Pippa K. on 10/22/04 A sweet and satisfying story. Thank you. If you'd like to improve it, you might want to try to find someone to play editor for you. You have good ideas, but your skills need work, and you might benefit from a little outside direction. It's up to you. Your work is still nice as it is, and I for one will be happy to read your next story. |
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