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Modeling Lingerie in France
by Lexie Byrd

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Comment by Lexie Byrd on 10/14/09
Thanks to Lisa Kaufmann for the comment. Yes, there is a sequel, but I've changed the story drastically. I put it on Fictionmania under my pen name, riottgrrl, and got to a trip to the United States followed by one confrontation, of two.

My personal life has forced me to put a hold on the story. I want to complete it to an offbeat happy ending, after a couple of twists and turns on one more continent.

I'd love to hear more from you. Marina 12 offered me a good idea years ago, and aardvark helped me clarify my thoughts about the roles the characters play. I didn't keep in contact with Mardee Prynne, for which I'm sorry. All your comments were greatly appreciated, and I will try to keep in closer touch in the future.

In the meantime, I'd like to post Chapter 16 on Fictionmania for Halloween.

rg

PS: Clicking on a highlighted name does not get me into an e-mail window as I'd hoped. Has something been changed at Storysite?


Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 09/16/09
Interesting choices - we all must make them. Jens - Jeanette made the most of hers. Wonder how she is doing now? Will we find out in a sequel?

Comment by Silvia         (from Brazil) on 07/20/09
Nothing forced is good.
I'm sorry, but I didn't like your story.
Silvia.

Comment by julie j on 08/24/04
a good story with many twists&turns as well as bribery &enforcement what a choice boarding school or being a girl no i would have prefered  the boarding school option

Comment by Kate L on 06/30/03
Dubious story, but excellent lovingly drawn-out descriptions of gorgeous silk and satin lingerie.

Comment by julie on 03/18/03
nice story a very hard choice to make it seems that aunties plan was aways to have a niece not a nephew what a change and perfect set up and jens just let her get on with it what was so hard about a boarding school nothing i was in one brilliant story well writton more pleased but with some enforcement in it

Comment by Flash on 09/18/02
Nice story indeed, but Ms Lexie Byrd is not the author, as you might deduct from the very typical Danish names in the story. The story was originally published in Danish on a European BBS in 1992. The author was Mr Jens Bogaard Madsen.

Comment by Marina 12 on 09/17/02
A very good story---with just the right amount of "tension"  I was pleased at how Jens was not overly "entheuastic" about having to become a 'girl".--He just did what he had to do.  and later learned that it wasn't so bad after all.

  I hope to read more stories from you--so keep writing.

My only criticisim was that the initial "Set up" was too direct and quick.  It would have been better if his Aunt took the initiative and began to dress one morning him without telling him before hand.  When he figured out what was going on and demanded an explaination, THEN she would tell him the deal.---Either co-operate or be sent off to boarding school. WHen she is satisfied with his appearence--she makes him the offer--remain like that or you will have to leave.

M12

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 09/17/02
A magnificent story.  The lavishly detailed descritions of the very femme underthings is intense, vivd, and arousing.  Hopefully, we will read more from this very talented author.



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