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A Moment of Decision
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Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 02/07/10
The story is not bad, but I don't know why Elizabeth did this with him. Comment by lee lee on 01/04/08 I love a love story How many of us wish our wives would want us to become a woman and not have it forced on us by devious means. Although I do not know what the wife got out of it. My wife and I have had discussions that ended with "and what about me what am I supposed to do?' She obviously had a reason and it was never made clear. She liked normal sex with him so why did she encourage his sex change. Of course in reality these things take many more twists and turns and few end up very happy. But we can dream and thank you for painting our dream in such pretty colors. lee lee Comment by julie on 09/30/03 so esily led but story was ok things went to fast for my liking Comment by julie on 09/30/03 an interesting story but barry was so easily led i would have thought he would have put up a fight allhe requested was thing taken slowly Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/18/03 I still don't understand Elizabeth's motivation. It was obviously a very carefully thought out plot, and she never did answer his questions as to why. What would she have done if he had been unwilling and resistant? I know she said she would love him if he chose to go back to being Barry, but by the time she said that, she had to have been 99% certain he would choose Barbara. Comment by Rose on 03/11/02 Great story, one of those that is the envy of us girls Comment by Paula Jutras on 04/14/01 entertaining little tale |
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