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Mommie's Pretty Panties
by Marci Manseau

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Comment by Joann on 08/06/12
I love this story. I found myself being El and wanting to be dressed in your cloths. It was such a turn on.
Comment by Karin on 03/30/10
I really enjoyed the loving dialog.  I really wish this story would continue you are a excellent crafter of words.  I have read this story many times.  
Comment by richard   on 06/26/08
please write the next chapter. I love your writing.     richard
Comment by PattyAnn on 06/05/08
Marci,

I just love this story. The way you develop El's character is so unique. I have just one request, Pretty panty please, take the story farther, I can see so many possibilities. I can't wait to see what happens next

PattyAnn

Comment by Briar on 08/14/07
Oh my, but that story is incredibly erotic!

I love the gentle slow way in which the trend towards dressing as a girl develops in it.  Truth be told, this actually does take place in a lot of families where there is only a mother and a daughter.

Briar

Comment by Abby Rhodes on 08/11/05
Come on Marci, get the next episode out. I can only wait so long, then I'm going to hold my breath until I turn purple and die. It's been nearly a year and this is a story that needs to be completed.

Hugs

Abby
Comment by kaye on 09/28/04
Please, please finish this story
Comment by Georgina on 07/14/04
Dear Marci

Gorgeous story. it's so much better to read some one else's writings that your own.

With apreciation

Gina
Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 07/10/04
Marci, please finish your other story "Daddy Becomes Mommy!"  We need many more of the type of story's which you write on this wondrous site.  I would be very grateful if you would--I love the way you write--Sharlee
Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 07/10/04
Lovely!!!  Please continue this story--Sharlee


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