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"Aunty" Nadine.
Jackie will most likely have to go TG. The two girls will have a good childhood!

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I just read your story.I think lisa was a very evil woman,and deserves a very tragic end.Really think Jack and Jenny should get together and raise the kids.Surely,at the end of the day,it's only lisa's word against Jack's.The lawyers should be de-barred or dis-robed,or whatever the term is

No love, no tenderness, no heart, no feeling, no nothing!
Someone thinks a woman is like this? No this is not a woman, certainly.
I'm very sorry for your story again. It's a very bad story!
Nothing more to say.
Silvia.

I'm really sorry, but your story is bad,bad,bad,bad.........
No woman is like this one.
I didn't like your story,sorry.
Silvia.

It looks like the co-authoress disappeared, unless someone knows what happened to Noel.

Hello.

  Sorry for the coolness but I just finished your story and although a Mother that hates and abandons her children is not that much of a stretch. It is not always the men in the world who are nasty and there are probably an equal number of nasty women. What I don't understand is how everyone seems to go along with this punishment and humiliation on a man that all who know him know him to be a wonderful man. What is the reasoning for the so called revenge. I don't understand ! I would really love to see Jackie get her revenge!

Perhaps you have issues along these lines? Please don't take revenge on an innocent, loving man.

                    Hoping life is better for you soon,

                               Dani

I think that Jackie, should go along with the bequest of the letter written by Lisa.   In fairness I think that after jackei begins HRT that Nadine and Lisa are discoverd as lovers and are both killed in an automobile accident. I also feel that the attorney and his office should undergo a terrible mishap cause by another irate victim of sleaze that destorys all paperwork and even the letter tha tis held by them. Then jackie and Jennifer can raise the two girls with out fear of retribution. Teh finale would be that Jennifer is transgendered

I did enjoy the flow of the story and your writing style very much.  Very powerful and engrossing.  The ending was almost too much for me as I have a wife who is unfortunately all too similar too lisa.  I found myself absolutely furious at Lisa hoping she would die a horrible death. I am calming down and realizing she will have to live with one of the worst people I have ever heard of,herself.  I think at least Jacqui should allowed to be a little more feminine in her self concept so she can be humiliated less. I wish you didn't have lisa wite such horrible letters and was hoping that she only wanted to come back to her family after Jacqui was completely transformed.  But I guess she has no interest in women.  And she is a picture of evil. I know of several women who have abondoned their children so it is not too much of a stretch.
Chris B

I think this is well contructed with Jack turning into what is truely a wonderful thing, a girl.

I like the way the story unfolded and the length of it gave me enough of a fine read.

Diane

if i was jack i would find lisa and but a bullet bewteen her eyes

Great story, can't wait for the sequel.

I'm curious about Lisa. She can't hold a job because of her temper, and a lot of her hatred of Jack is because he can no longer support her in the manner she wants. How is she living now? Does she have a new "sugar daddy"? Her revenge on Jack seem to be expensive, not too mention excessive. Who paid for it, or at least the initial drugs and hypnotherapy, and the lawyer? Did someone give her the idea and bankroll her? Could her treatment of Jack be a scheme to provide her with the income she desires? Could someone be lurking behind Lisa, waiting to get their hands on Jack?

In the story, Jack's testicles became swollen repeatedly, could that have left him sterile as well as impotent? That would be a blow to some men, especially those insecure in their masculinity, and could drive Jack(ie) to seek revenge at almost any cost. Of course, Jack has already satisfied his reproductive imperative, so it may not matter.

Hope you don't mind all those questions, but your story really started my mind aboiling. I even woke up this morning thinking about getting revenge on Lisa.

Waiting for part II!
- Nomad

This is the best story I've read in a long, long time... I absolutely love it! You MUST write a sequel!

I just can't believe how good it is... you capture every element so brilliantly... wow...

Jack should be given the chance to take revenge on Lisa. She's beyond being a bitch---she's evil! Same for Nadine. Whatever form Jack's revenge takes, it should include burying each 'lady' alive at some remote farm location. In separate coffins, of course.

Great story - I hope you continue it soon. I'd keep it nasty, with Nadine and Lisa increasing the pressure - making it impossible for resistance as the changes increase, and become irreversible and ultimately humiliating.

Well my input is quite simple keep the stories instensity and pacing the same. Have jackie get her revenge but at the same time he will be completely feminine.I like the story and think you should take some input but it keep it yours

As I said with the original, I loved it up to the point that the mistress apeared, because it felt "real" up to that point, like it could really happen. As for future instalments, I would take Jackie to the very edge of suicide, but then redeem her through her kids, let her come to accept being a she-male and a mommy. That is until a certain peadiatrician, who won't take NO for an answer, shows her what romance and being in love is realy like. By then she should be desperate for the sex change. For an epilog, jump ahead to the girls graduation ceremony and let us see how well they come out. As for Lisa, yes we would all love to get some revenge, but in the real world you don't always get what you want. Learning to let go and forgive are far better lessons.

I posted my comments at Fictionmania weeks ago.  Please, please, please, Mommy II, Part II  SOON!

The story was intense almost too much so. Lisa is a very self centered bitch intent on ruining her now former husband and children, the kind of person you love to hate. The writing was good as was the detail but unless the second part gives more detail, the plot line isn't very nice.

I Think the wife is pretty sadistic.  The wife is playing with fire.  The man did not deserve this, especially when kids are involved.  Because, If he doesn't go through with the change.  The babies will have no one to take care of them. Cuz, Lisa is selfish and could care less. I think he should go through with the year of living as a woman. But, I think there should be some revenge.  Especially against everyone else who was involved in this plot.

I wonder if Jenifer, the neighbor is involved.  All in all I thought the story was quite compelling.  But I hope the next one is out soon.