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I cannot comment on the content of your story because I barely got past the first few pages.  You should really consider taking some grammar lessons to make your writing readable.

I'm sorry, but I didn't like your story!
I think that she should not have revealed the secret for her son, and that it should on being the mother whom he always knew!
Incest isn't right!
I'm sorry, but this is what I think!
Silvia.

I have searched the net for a story just like this. I find all the elements that I find exciting are here. It wasn't crude but sweet as the two characters found their roles change and develop. Well done Maggiecat. I thoroughly enjoyed this and would recommend it to other like minded friends. Hugs xxx

its a sweet story of experimenting &trying out a good story worth the read

Well written and totally believable girlFRIEND!!!  And soooooo SWEEEEEET!!!!!

I like the twists the story takes, it is quite unique from the other fiction I've read and written here.  Where my plot lines tend to use trumped up "force" and dominance to make it "OK" for my heroines to feel the way they do, your use of revelation, devotion, acceptance and above all love to do the same for both of your characters make this an exceptional piece.

Bravo honey!!!!!   I'm off now to go make my own sticky mess!!!  <<giggle!!!>>

Kisses!!!

Sissy Prissy

well written and incredible sweet story.

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OOOPS!  I just realized I put a spoiler in the review below.  If you haven't read the story, please do not read the review below!  Sorry folks.

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First, I want to say that this was a very well-written story.  There were a couple of typos (which we all make) and some confusing verb tense (past/present mixed) at the beginning but otherwise excellent writing.  It was very descriptive and the characters were well-enough developed.  The story flowed nicely.

As far as the subject matter, let me just say that you are very brave.  I personally don't have a problem with it, but choosing underage and incestuous themes will probably turn off a lot of readers.  Don't take it too personally.  It is just a story, after all.  Honestly, as a young child, I had some very similar fantasies.

The thing that kept me reading was the surprise of the mother really being the father.  That was a very good plot twist.  The sexual relationship developed a little quicker after that than it might have in real life with a caring mother figure, but it didn't harm the story much.

Overall, a very good story.  I'd like to see you write a longer story and take some time to develop the characters and plot a little more, if you are so inclined.  Either way, keep up the good work.  You are a very good writer.