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Mommy’s New Girl
by Jasmine Lee

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Comment by Dale. Downes on 04/26/23
Thankyou so much for sharing this ord incredible story.  I was completely living the story as I read . I was enchanted by your writing, I laughed, I was really turned on and cried too.  I love every word I read. You are very gifted . I so look forward to reading more of your wonderful work.  Thank you again. Dale.

Comment by rose "AKA zach" pantoja on 02/14/12
i absolutley loved this story i cried many times (AND IM NOT EVEN ON HORMONES >.<) IT WAS SWEET AND DREAMY I WISH I WAS CHRISSY!!!!!! so yes plz write more

Comment by lilben on 03/28/11
i love your storys please write some more,the love you put in to them i can only dream about.

Comment by Lisa on 06/08/10
I loved the story.    

Comment by Matthew on 08/22/05
Enjoyed this story very much...Thank you.



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