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Comment by Deborah Rustle on 01/27/22
Thank you, I loved this story and so wish my childhood could have unfolded in this way; my first experience of dressing myself was when my sister was a bridesmaid and I will never forget waking before her early one saturday morning and ceremoniously wearing the outfit which was a chiffon full-skirted dress with a dainty hat and gloves. Comment by ashley on 03/28/12 yes, just like it was for me during those years. (sigh) but I didn't have that kind of mother - - - Comment by Aleesha on 10/27/10 I enjoted your story very much. I have always liked the themes where mothers help their sons become girls. I missed where Melissa's brothers were when they went out but perhaps they were with their father. Thanks. Comment by Silvia. on 06/21/10 You wrote a great story, and I loved it. Comment by Connie on 05/12/10 I am reading lots of stories .But this one is so sweet and very believeble. Comment by Sharon on 02/18/10 Such a beautiful story i love reading about mothers helping their sons become beautiful girls as my mother did.In every young boy Comment by Ashley on 08/25/09 What a wonderful, tender set of chapters. Your gift for expressing the gradual transition of the characters into a new reality is very impressive. Many would think that a mother's reaction could only be negative to these events...I am happy to read of your belief that this preconception is wrong. Please keep up the good work. Comment by harry on 10/29/08 do not stop this can not be all wot happined next did she go to the same school and did she get mead fun of Comment by Bradley on 07/11/08 What an exciting end to the story. When her son was about to ejaculate as his mother was about to put the condom on him, I was so hoping she would want to prevent the mess by simply lowering herself over his penis and letting her son relieve himself in her mouth. It didn't quite happen that way, but I'm sure she would have been willing to do that for her son if he needed it. That would have been a thrilling way to end their first night out together as mother and daughter! Comment by juliej on 03/24/07 I thought this was a great story it shows that some mothers due care about boys who want to be girls etc very good writing well done Comment by Bill (Barbara) Carnegie on 02/18/07 A beautiful story. Any crossdresser eould love to have such an understanding mother. Comment by Anne on 06/10/06 The thought of being tied to the bedpost and whipped hard by mother blows my mind especially when the beltlands on ruffled panties. Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 01/07/04 Really nice story Ami. I really hope it is not done. There is so much to cover. You should really develop it a lot more. You do very well with sweet and sentimental. Better than most, as it seems there is a lot of real longing that you do a good job of transferring to print. Well polished and nothing at all stood out in the way of mechanics, as it should be. My main complaint is that it just doesn't seem done and you say it is with the complete notice. I hope you change your mind. Maybe part two six months later? Comment by Janine on 02/22/03 Nice Story. I hope there is more to come then just the three parts. I want to hear what her Dad and brothers have to say. I hope that it is as positive as the mothers. I also want to hear about how it goes at school. Comment by Rose on 02/20/03 Great story. Ilike the way this is evolving. Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 02/20/03 Nice story. Just my cup of tea. Please continue with chapter three. I'm just dying to see what adventures await Melissa. Comment by Paula on 02/19/03 Part 2 shows so far that each part will be better than the last. Comment by jim on 02/18/03 WoW! I really like the start! I hope that it continues in the same manner! An A+ story! Comment by Mary on 02/18/03 A nice start can't wait for the rest. Comment by horseman on 02/18/03 A good beginning to a possibly long and enjoyable story. Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/17/03 a wonderful story and a fantastic ending |
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