Hi Beth.

Great story , I just loved it.

Congratulations Beth! You're one of the best writers I read.
Why, others writers don't write stories like yours?
Your story is simply marvelous, sweet, and a lovely love story, between mother and daughter.
You don't need sex to write a great story. Sex is good,and everyone knows everything about sex, but sex isn't everything in our life!
You did a great job.
A lot of kisses.
Silvia.

I agree  with your other readers in that this was a well told sweet and sentimental story. Well done and thanks.

HI loved your story,I wish all tv storys could be like this, to me there was only one thing missing, APRONS, pretty feminine aprons, worn by mother and daughter. Maybe its me, but not enough storys have pretty aprons worn in them, by tvs. I dont mean the tv is turned into a maid. thanks cindy

Very lovely story. Please continue it so we can see how Elizabeth and her Mother and other relatives come to terms with "the new daughter". Huggs to you, J-Lynn

I visualize when I read; with stories like this one, that can be quite a liability. I can't worry that I can barely see the expressions on their faces through the clouds of smoke-- I'm too busy baling out of there before I strangle in reaction to nicotine poisoning. Watching mother and daughter blow smoke in each other's faces really takes the sweetness out of it all for me.

Other than that (or, if you happen to be a Devotee of the Leaf and like to breathe deeply of this atmosphere), this is a story of two people who take a risk on each other, and are richly rewarded by doing so. Acceptance and unconditional love are all the more precious because they are so rare in the world. Those of us who usually experience intolerance, fear, and bigotry understand why misery and suffering are so much more common. Many of us could only wish that we had someone-- anyone-- who would open up to us, much less our own mothers.

Though this is a TG fiction archive, this story is clearly autobiographical. It is told in a simple and straight-forward first-person narrative not usually found in fictional accounts. That one among us found acceptance at home, and from a mom conditioned by her background to definitely NOT accept such things, makes this more of a wish-fulfillment story than any fiction possibly could.

is there any more part. wot happins next post more

thank you
harry

A fabulous story! I just love a sweet and sentimental story....and this is one of the sweetest and most sentimental ones that I have read! I'm sooooo happy that you have decided to go thisway with it, please write more of it in the future.

Thank you for such a wonderful story. It make me look back in my life and wish things were different now. Please add more chapters to this story. Well written, soft stories are hard to come by and you are great. Thanks again.
Jeanne

its a good start to a story well written more please

I loved the story. I would have loved to meet my mother as did Beth - I like to think she would have accepted me as another daughter.

You've really captured the situation and the feelings on both sides very realistically.

A very nice story.  I wish my mum was still alive and she was as accepting as yours but then again she would have insisted on calling me Sarah because that was the name my parents chose for me.

Anyway, your story touches me because I can imagine being in Elizabeth's position, the lucky girl.  And Elizabeth is the sort of girl I like to be - fun to have around and just nice female company.

Take care hon.
Hugs Jen XXX

Hi Elizabeth:

   Once in a while a story connects and moves me so I have to read it over again a few times maybe many times over the years. This is such a story and is so real and heartwarming I sincerely hope you continue. I guess the only wish is that Mom and her daughter would have many more adventures and meet the whole family. This story is a gem so please continue.

   Hugs,

   Kristi

Lovely story my dear. I am very jealous of Beth and hope to read more of her life. Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

A very nice story and well written - I would love to see more about CDing tho, and a lil sex always makes things more fun :)

Really pleasant.  Thanks for posting it.

Very sweet.  I hope there is more.  This is a refreshing change from the mostly harsh forced femme stories posted at the same time as this one.  

sweet story, w/o femdom.  i hope there is more as mom gets to know "beth".