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Mom's Gone Shopping
by Pete Zee

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Comment by suba me on 12/20/18
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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/04/14
ZdbVVP I loved your article.Really looking forward to read more. Want more.

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
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Comment by smashing top seo on 10/24/13
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Comment by only for 5 dollars on 09/12/13
akBweW I really liked your article.Really thank you! Cool.

Comment by link building on 09/05/13
GaENyh I loved your post.Really thank you! Keep writing.

Comment by Nicola on 09/10/11
Wow I just love this story,I love the way they stroke each others bodies and legs enjoying the feel of nylon and satin PLEASE PLEASE can we have some more.Though I don't go with the idea of humiliating him,the atmosphere is more loving than that.

Comment by Randilegs on 05/13/11
Wonderful!  Depsite the relative age of these stories, I am hoping for more!

Comment by leelee on 12/09/09
Having had a brush with encest with my step mother at the age of 8 through 10   ( most of it very vanilla) and having been introduced by her to the joy of being a little girl   I related to this story very much. Although my father did not live with us anymore  there were men whom she let me peek at when she had sex and on one unforgettable night I tasted his cum in her pussy.  We never openly disucssed our activities with each other but from the the first time she put me in a little green taffeta dress and knew I was a sissy and except hiding it at school  I loved coming home and being a little miss.  to this day I love housekeeping and laundry etc  because I relate it to my early transformation  My name at home was leelee   and oddly enough my wife called me that on our very first date....there is something warm and 'right' about a mother's desires

Comment by SassySue on 11/29/04
I agree with most of the other comments.  Now that Pete Zee is posting again, maybe he can go back and write more episodes of this story.  I look forward to reading more about the mom helping her son dress in sexy clothes and teaching him about how women like sex.

SS

Comment by Stefan on 11/09/04
What a wonderful naughty mummy! OH! I wish........

Comment by Paula Thompson on 09/12/03
Love the stories you wrote. Please continue. Like the comments by Annette. Yes make the stories a bit longer.
Love Paula

Comment by jo on 12/30/02
I liked these stories, but thought the hard core started too quickly. How about more fore play with dressing and maybe a real shopping trip while dad is away. I do not think you should cross the line to penetration, but could go right to it. Maybe mom has a sister or good friend to bring to the scene.

Comment by Annette on 12/26/02
I liked all three story parts, but I thought the end of part three was sexy and arousing,when the mom opened the used condom from her sex, and she pouredthe semen into his mouth and she told him to swallow it, and she told him that is what girls like, while she masturbated him to climax in his silky panties.  Can we see more of this, and the mother askes her women friends to help her feminize and humiliate her son more? Maybe they also get men to have anal sex with him, and deposit all their loads inside him, while they put a tampon in his ass when they are through to make him think that he will become pregnant by them.  They could even humiliate him more by pissing on him too.  

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 12/11/02
A deliciously sinful tale that dares to cross over into the taboo of incest.  DO write more.
Mardee

Comment by Erica on 12/10/02
Great stories but wish they were longer. The incest doesn't bother me one bit. I'm eagerly awaiting future installments. Hope there are many. And I hope we don't have long to wait.

Comment by Chris on 12/10/02
quite wonderfull!!!! Please do continue!!!

Comment by Paula on 12/10/02
Love part one better until the dildo came out. I could of been a sweet shopping trip story without going hard core like end of part 1 and part 2 got into.

Comment by Jaclyn on 11/13/02
  I  loved  the  story,  until  "Mom"  Got  The
Dildo out  of  the  drawer.  Too  late  to  loose
it  now.  guess You've lost my reading more.  Next
time,  Just  a  "lesbian" type affair.  The Incest
Is Exciting.

Comment by Pete Zee (the author) on 11/11/02
Glad I didn't offend most of you, other than anoynomous Gomel, who obviously was offended and does not have a true critical bent - still sure he/she/it is happy ;>)  Feedback would be most appreciated.

Comment by Constance Grant on 11/09/02
I like this story, it is a fine begining and hope you continue it.  I have no problem with tales containing incest, after all it is one of the great themes of literature.  However, I think you should label as such.

Comment by Rose2 on 11/09/02
A very interesting first part of a story.  I was turned off by the incest part but thought the rest was well written.

Comment by shawna on 11/09/02
I think this is a very interesting story with many places to go in "more to come".  Please continue.

Comment by Michelle on 11/09/02
It's a very nice starter story.  A true coming of age story that I hope will not be your only one.  Keep up the good work

Comment by Georgina on 11/09/02
It is like my stories. Very sexy. forget the adverse comment below. (If it doesn't turn you on then at least have the decency to accept that others can have different views.) Nicely written. Let's have more.

Comment by Gomel on 11/08/02
Piece of trash.  At the very least it should have an X-I rating.  Close enough to incest for me.



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