I luv the story. It brought back so many wonderful memories of growing up as a transgender child with mommy. I was a transgender child and raised by a single parent. I related to so many incidents and feelings Daniele experienced especially learning how to be a girl. The make up,the shopping trips and all the love and support from mommy. It was wonderful to see Danny finally transform into the lovely young lady mommy always wanted and get in touch with his female side and feelings.I liked the part when Daniels sexualy serviced her cousin.It brought back memories of my first time giving head and becoming a real woman. I was the same age as Daniele-14.

I loved this story so much that I read it to my mommy and we relived so many wonderful memories from my childhood. I have transitioned now and had all my surgeries and I am now the loving daughter mommy always wanted.

Thank you for writing this story.

Love
Viktorya

I read all chapters on fictionmania, too bad the ending is not a real ending, we will never know what he will decide, i hope his choice is to live with his father, the sissylovers would love to see him to turn into a real woman, that is sick, because he is a non- transgender boy, a normal straight boy who has been manipulated and seduced by his evil mother, not only Danny is the victim of mom's psychological child abuse, his younger brother is also a victim, believing what mom told was true about his brother to become a girl and the teasing of him towards Danny is his way of not accapting the that his brother is becoming his sister, dad is right, what if Kyle finds out Danny is realy a boy and not a girl, things would be realy nasty for Danny, i hope for Danny the hormones mom gave him with a lie that it were vitamins didn't do to much damage so he can recover himself when he resumes his old live and live with his father and be a boy again.

Danny's mother would not dare to publicly reveal Dannielle's true gender because it would bring Danny's predicament to the attention of Child Welfare resulting in the reinstatement of Danny's male identity and the imprisonment of his mother.

The mother is one severely twisted woman. For a divorcee who claims that the father has no right, due to his delinquency with child support, she sure has an abundance of cash readily available for punishing her problem child. What started out as a temporary punishment was eagerly turned into a life-long sentence, for the child, by the mother. And the little brat, Mike, should be the one drugged. By the way, how did she come across the medicine.  Daniel should have just locked himself in a closet and called 911. Let the other inmates punish the mother.

Interesting Story. But why the hell is the whole family(mom,cousin,and brother) blackmailing him the entire time. And the mom seemed have this "punishment" planned to prolong from 2 weeks--a month--the summer vacation(which somehow seems to be 6 months)---to the sentence(punishment) 2 weeks short of ending---to a catch 22 of being free of fem. to forced choice of military school(going in as he's dresses) or her masterminded plan to a all girl school.
plus
I get he's getting into the girl play, but what the hell is wrong with his cousin which is his family FAMILY!! FAMILY!! no,no,no,no!!

Most of us transvestite can relate to this story.  instead of having a mommy force us to dress like a girl, our emotions do. At first there is denial, embarrassment, anger, and finally acceptance.

     I wonder what Daniel's mother's reaction would have been if Daniel, dressed as a girl, had told his mother that he was going to the police to confess his crime ? As a minor, it would be most unlikely for him to be sent to juvenile hall for a self confessed minor theft, on the other hand, his mother could face charges of child abuse.

I have only gotten through Chapter 4 so far, but I just wanted to mention how much I am enjoying this story.  Although I understand some of the criticism about the Mother taking it too far and Danny having no spine for going along with the feminization so easily, let's not forget that this is fiction that appeals to a certain segment of even the TG community.  My supposition is that Danny doesn't protest more vigorously because on a deep level he is enjoying the transformation and is a sissy or transvestite at heart.

I do want to mention that their is a real Mount Saint Mary's Academy for Girls in Watchung NJ.  The description of the unifom is spot on from what I remember, although it may have been updated since then.  Check out the uniform page at mountsaintmary.org
The MSMA girls sometimes attended dances at my public high school.  They had a reputation, which I don't know whether it was deserved or not, of being a little bit wilder than the public school girls whenever they were away from the watchful eyes of the nuns and chaperones.

6RnBD1 Appreciate you sharing, great post.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

     There are many stories about mothers petticoating sons as a form of punishment and then becoming so obsessed with the result that they have contrived to make the gender change permanent so this story is not unique. I wonder what the consequences would have been if : -
  1. Daniel had 'NO' included in his vocabulary.
  2. The premise is that petticoating will make a boy so scared of being 'read' that he will try to behave in a feminine manner and blend in so as not to attract attention to himself. Suppose Daniel had deliberately brought attention to himself, treating the whole thing as a huge, ridiculous joke against his mother trying to turn him into a girl.
  3. Having been enrolled in an exclusive girls school suppose Daniel went to the principals office and - with proof in his hands - told the principal that his mother had falsely presented him as a girl to enter as a pupil. If this information was openly disclosed some parents may remove their daughters from the school, the school may lose its registration, the school may be forced to close and Daniels mother may have to face criminal charges.
  Even if Daniel did not divulge his secret, is it possible that he would not be discovered during the intended four years at the school ?
  Good story but definitely fictitious.

hi, I just finished reading all the 10 parts and so far I have liked your story (but i admit in some passages I've hated Danielle's mom and his cousin). it would be nice if you continue your story, and especially for me i would like to know how is her hormones going on. (at the beginning of he year she was an A cup, just would like how her body has changed so far). by now she must have noticed it, what is her reaction about it? is she happy with her body, how she handles the teen pressure to have a woman's body?
I'm also intrigued to know how mike will be punish for crossing the line with danielle before the dance. is she coming back from the dance to find a new sister? I also would like to know if karma is going to affect her cousin for what he did to her during the summer.
please keep writing!

I don't see this kid ever amounting to more than a streetwalker. Of course it wouldn't be his fault. His mom rather than considering the importance of his self-esteem she ramroded this punishment down his throat. If I were this kid I would have cringed every time this bitch called me 'honey' or any such term of endearment. The lies she kept telling his brother was not the only dishonesty she was showing. Big damn hypocrit is what she was. The only remedy for me in this gendre is exactly what is missing in these stories. KARMA. 'You reap what you sow'.

The cruel and evil nature of dans mother cannot be overstated. If she had snapped and accidently killed the kid while punishing him she would have had to endure the repurcussions of that. What makes the authors of these stories think that their perpetrators should not incur diliterious repurcussions? It is ok for the kids, that these evildoers target, hate them. That would be the natural inclination of anyone who has to endure such abuses. The perpetrators can force action but they cannot tell their victims what to think and what to feel. And there is no way in hell she was doing it for his own good. People fight back! Particularly, they fight back to regain hope lost. Given the choice people choose not to live without hope.

Interesting story,but you really need to continue writing about it. Please I am ready to read more

I have just found this story I so want to read more of it.
Please do more to it I want to know how the dance go's.
Dose he/she stay a girl or dose he/she get found out.
Dose he go on to live a full life .
I am twenty five now and dress as a girl.
This was my doing from an early age as I looked like a girl
And was picked on all the time.
People always asked if I was a girl dressed as boy.
So myself and mother and father went for a meeting at my
school.
It was from that meeting my self and the head of the school .
Made the desition that i would be a girl.
My mother and father was happy for me to do this.
And I have never looked back.
That's why I want to see the ending to your story.
XxX
And it was

Great story! Please keep up the good writing.

o, and by the way, if he wasnt gay, at this time he should have been raged with hormones. At first after my mom told me my punishment, i tryed to slit my neck open with my hunting knife. IF he WAS'NT gay, he would have either A, killed himself, or B, burnt down his house. This story is fake. im sorry for the hate but jesus crist. You ruined my fun. You killed everyone i loved and new. I have died inside. So to all you people thinking about this story, think about what would have REALLY happened. And to all you racist people out there, just becuase im russian i would hate americans.

I an sorry to say this but im a younger reader, im only 14, but what has happened here put an end to my 'fetish'. I started cross dressing full time a few months ago becuase i was punished {except for drugs} and i found it fun but after this it has ending. I have left my house and family behind. i am adopted and ive saved 4k to move back to russia. i have left a note in my room for my parents.
They werent evpecting me to do something so drastic, but if this kid is american, i dont care if he is a guy, he has no balls. He is gay.
Im not homophobic but this story is alittle over done. All it did was another reason for me to hate Americans more.

I just re-read chapter 4 where mom reveals what a dishonorable liar she really is. Her "choice", given the conditions she makes, is go to the girls' school or get killed, and they both know it.  It would have been so nice to see Dan say, "Okay, my choice is still Brighton!" and see what mom would do.  I see the velvet glove coming off, a hypo, and SHE wakes up weeks later.

Wow!!!
I really enjoyed the story......
Why did u stop writing....u should have continued.....its the best story in this website.............

i would like to meet Danielle and date her i feel just like her i need her help to become a girl and get a girls name i would like the name Katie

oops sorry wrong story sry but urs is cool nice ideas and again sry this the wrong story theres one about real life situations sry

ur moms nuts i would have faked passing out i tend to over react but i might have ran away did i mention SHES WACKO!!

I reposted this story some time ago at fictionmania with some minor changes and a somewhat better ending....so if anyone wants to read a bit more you can look there..the reason i did that was it was at a time when this site was having some technical difficulties...
suejrz

Love the story and would like to know is Daniele finished school and stayed a girl? Did she find a boyfriend etc.
Thanks for the enjoyable reading.

the best story here
Too bad you have stopped writing

Hello sue, your stories are so exciting for me to read, very nice, I bet that Dani has real beautiful fall in love with legs

wow Sue, i think this is a very nice continueing story. Where do you get all of the ideas from, although you, your self must be a cery sexy person.

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Thanks for your story, it was a pity that Dannielle was so submissive.

First of all let's say this was really well done. Let me have a guess about the author's intention. Danielle discribes her transformation and her raising well-being within the process up to chapter 10. She more and more likes all this girly stuff to wear and anything feminine in her sourroundings. In the end we have a picture of a proud girl wearing some nice dress and made up for her first date. And all the boys out there beleive me you have no idea about a girl's feelings wearing a ball gown for her first time, be jealous! Therefore, any other ending or further chapter might run the hole story into a disaster. One version could be to force Danny back into his poor old life and stealing away all his emotions he struggled for. Some other continuance would lead into a parnership. Congratulations to Kerrie Lynn and anyone else to have such a tolerant partner, but in case of Danielle this would make the story sound a bit constructed.

Thanks for this wonderful story discribing the far distance between female and male worlds.

Greets from Norway.

I THINK FOR AN ENDING DANNY SHOULD KILL EVERYONE AND BURN THE HOUSE DOWN AND MOVE WITH HIS DAD WHERE HE CAN BE A REAL MAN AND NOT SOME TRANSVESTITE. IF I WAS DANNY I WOULD HAVE HUNG MY SELF OR BURNED THE HOUSE DOWN WITH HIS MOM INSIDE

This one is downright ugly.
Sorry, won't ever bother to read more than the first half chapter.
Lots of hate humiliation and abuse.

Yoron.

I'ts time for an ending,first too get in a fight with mikie she rakes both sides of his face with long fingernails seeing the blood she just has to help so she take out of her purse a washrag laced with flesh eating bacteria from her bio class at school.second jason as he thought she was such a fox he just had to rape her a gin after the dance  it was his duty,,danell thought it only fair to tell him or maybe not,she just got a report back from the lab confirming full blown aids..as for the girls they were the best but he was still a boy even if he could'nt die as one.knowing this had gone to far to ever come back to normal.and the note to mother dearest, mother I know you said this was for my own good so I hope your right and you can show those pictures to who you want to now as it does'nt matter any more and one more thing,I thought telling the whole story only fair now so I SENT A COPY OF THE NOTE TO THE NEWPAPER AND THE (POLICE).I got undressd the tub was full of hot water just a little bath oil for good  measure.then I reach into the  medicin cabinent grab the sleeping pills and the old strat edge razer.this I thought was a good girlie way to go. as the sleeping pills took efect it was time I grab my penis one slash,,by by love you..

Suzie, thank you sooo much!  What a sweet story.

Huggs!  Lauri

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ok you really gotta write more, i couldnt stop reading.. lol please finish what u have started, i really want to know what happens next, has jason changed? or is he only giving her/him that good feeling in hoping he can take advantage of dani/daniele again, and mikey, will it be his turn now since so far he's the only one in the family thats acting out in a mean, rude way towards all of this, will dani/danielle discover what the pills r his mother is giving him and what he will do when he learns of this info, and what about his new girlfriends, both karen and his school friends, will one or all of them ever find out his secret will some be sympathetic and continue the friendship or hate him and humiliate him even more than his own mother did and his former guy friends, what will become of them, will they ever find out the truth, at this point will daniele even care if they know or not? damn there's just so much to go on in this story and only mentioned a few of what could be, u gotta continue this, please continue this story!

You have created such a masterpiece that I found myself in a lose/lose situation when I was ready to start to read the conclusion.  The only thing worse than not being able to read the conclusion would be to read the conclusion and finish the story.

Please, please write more.

Love,

Judy

That was a wonderful story. It reminds me when I was 17 and school was out for summer my mother asked me what was I gonna do this summer?
I told her I don't know.
Mom was out playng Bridge one the 3rd day of summer I had no bathing suit to wear this year to swim in our pool. So then I went to my sister's room and got one of her Bikinis and put it on. Mom came home with my sister early and I paniked try to run and hide my sister started laughing. Mom asked her what is so funny she showed Mom I was her bikini boy was mom mad. She grabbed me by the hand led me strait to her room and strippped me nekid. I was so embarassed she then started yelling at me calling a sissy. You want to be a sissy do you well it will be on my terms not your smeaking around. I tried to explain but she would have nothing doing. Mom then marched me into the bathroom and put some smelly creame on me and shoered me off my hair was all gone.Then came the bubble bath. She returned with a robe for me to wear with a pair of my sister's panties for me to wear. I did as I was told and put them on. Then she maid me go sit in my room until my dad got home with my brother from ball practice. They were sitting in the den talking and Mom called for me I was so ashamed. Sissy come here I slowly came to the den where my parents were sitting. My gbrother and sister were sitting there as well and giggling at me standing there. Mom then told my sister to get her nal kit and pick out a real bright color of nail polish. I was then told to sit in the chair and remain still. I kept looking at dad for help but declined to help me. Mom then said let me have your left foot sissy I did. She then gave me a pedicure turned my tn toenails Fusha Pink then next was my fingernails she filed buffed and turned them Fusha Pink as well. My sister put a coat of chromer on after words OMG they were shinny and bright.Mom then said I would be spending the summer as a girl I was not allowed and boi clothes. The next came and th fear set in Mom had all her friends over for a pool party here I was in my Bikini with shiny nails to be seen mother introduce me as her sissy son. They got a laught out of my predicimite an starting telling mom I was too pretty to ever be a boy. I should have to wear sandals all summer so my pretty toes could be seen. Mother thought that was such a wonderful idea all my shoes were replaced with sandals and strappy heels.From that day I was a sissy and I love it today for I am 19 and my breast are 36C. I have a boyfriend who I dearly love his cock . There is not a day I do not suck his cock and swalllow all his cum. I am so glad I am all sissy.
                                  Kerrie Lynn

Great Story, but as some of the previous respondents have said, the mother character does seem to have changed, and that does change the whole thrust of the story.  The vitamin pills we can all guess at, and following that through would be a bit obvious.  But, I did notice in the last chapter (10) that Mother was getting a little exasperated with Mikey, so perhaps his turn is coming up, and wouldn't big brother have fun getting his own back and 'helping' Mikey with his changeover.  Or perhaps the Aunty who has gone along with the feminisation gets to hear what Jason co-erced Dan/Danielle into doing, and decides her son needs to learn a few lessons in proper respect. Now there's some things to think about!  I would hate for Danny/Danielle to give up the struggle, or to have anything done which permanently stops his return, because the fun of this story is the struggle, the hope of eventual return, and the so near but so far siezing of it. Well written, Suejrz, I look forward to more chapters.

I loved reading your story, Mom's Unique Punishment. I adored Danny/Danielle's exposure to his/her brother and cousin most of all. If you've ever written any other petticoat punishment stories which involve humiliating exposure in girly clothes, I would love to have the chance to read them sometime. If you're interested in emailing, I can also point you to my own small efforts along those lines.

Thanks for a very enjoyable read...

OH Suzie!! PLEASE PLEASE finish the nxt chapter. I await it with bated breath!!

it is a good story to read and I found that parts 11+12 are on fictionmania.com

I feel like I am being punished by being made to wait so long.
Please.....

part 10 was quite good will have to reread the whole story again at a later date welldone

OH Suzie!! I absolutely LOVE this story!! There was one rough chapter but as it grows I see how necessary it is. It all about coming into womanhood!! All of us T-Girls have had those things happen to us. I love the mother and how for the good of her future daughter she manipulates her in to situations that require her daughter to remain in girl mode. Oh please tell us about her discovering her blossoming into woman, her breasts growing her skin getting softer and smoother. I can't wait to read how her dance date turns out.

we are all waiting. This long wait is crual.

a great story of a unique punishment what a way to go brilliant look forewards to the next part

Looking forward to the next chapter.  Keep up the good work!

The feminization of a reluctant boy I find very exciting. My fanatsy.
The teaseing of 'her' brother is a constant embarrassement and humiliation for danielle. The point of becomeing feminine enjoying it but at the same time not.... very exciting. And haveing a boyfriend. Especially one that enjoys haveing a 'sissy' girlfriend.
Absolutely love it.

This is the best story I've read in years! Please continue!! And thanks for your efforts! I actually got a little teary at the end of the last chapter...
Maddie

Plese continue with the story - can't wait until you write the next chapter.  I also wonder why Danielle's brother has been spared.  Is it his turn next?  

Keep it up>>>

I am so glad to see another chapter of this fine story.  I am just as enthralled with this chapter as I was with the first chapter a year ago.  
The interplay between Danielle and Mikey is a highpoint of the story.  It would not be a surprise to me were good old mom to get fed up with Mikey's inappropriate baiting, and subject him to the same routines.
I am concerned about Jason being the escort for the dance.  The story does not seem to present him with the maturity and the responsibility for the task.  I would hate to see Danielle be scandalized by the actions of an evil cousin.  She already has enough on her plate.
This story is so good, a mere thank you seems inadequate.  Thank you for persisting and posting.

Since Crystal's having a few personal problems lately and the updates are a bit slow, have you thought of submitting your wonderful story to other sites like FictionMania?

I totally love this story, but I am sad to see Danielle giving in so completely.  It is her knowledge that she is really a boy and her periodic rebellion and consequent subjugation that make this story so delicious.

     Huggs, Missy

great story now i am sprung i need to know the end    so please write the rest soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!

the story gets better &better it a bit of a pain with a brother like that but such is life i for one would like to know how danni gets his revenge back on his brother & cousin this would be great to read especially if they both end up like danni  now that would be sweet revenge i wonder also how long it will be before the father is baCK IN THE PICTURE CAUSING TROUBLE and when danni realises the vitamins are not vita mins but hormones wonderfull story so far please write the rest or the next part soon

a rotten cousin but danny was at fault for being led on by his friends his brother is very wicked as well a great story let trhe punishment fit the crime i look forwards to reading the other parts over the next far

Doris Exner was surprised when agents of State Family Services visited her with an arrest warrant.  It seems that her ex husband had made a formal complaint to the authorities.  For the past several weeks her activities had been under surveillance.

Ms. Exner has been charged with child abuse, child endangerment, and contributing to the delinquency of a minor.  She is being held in lieu of $500,000 bail.

Her eldest son Danny has been released to the custody of his father and is receiving therapy for the months of abuse he was forced to endure.  Her younger son Michael is also in his father's custody.

A spokesman for the Exner family declared, "Thank God Danny's ordeal is over."

Excellent story line. I look forward to the next story.

Super story! It has a wonderful feel to it and is well paced and easy to follow. I particularly like the sweet and sentimental aspects to it(not to much forced sex or physical abuse). It seems that Danielle is starting to accept her new-found womanhood, but her brother needs to be taught a lesson (maybe a day or two in dresses would do the trick, I'm sure). Jason seems to be the typical dirt bag type...All he wants is SEX and doesn't care where or who he takes it from! Maybe something happens at the dance and Danielle has a "Prince Charming" come along and rescues her (hopefully).Looking forward to the next installment.

Short but exceptional description of having to shop and the emotions involved.  wonder why Dan mentioned jason to good ole mom in the first place, but in any case i think the stage is right for dan's deflowering.  he seems to be adapting completely into his feminine persona and further relations with jason will cememt dan's acceptance of having to be a woman.  great story great writing what a holiday treat.  thanks

Your story was well written. i enjoyed every chapter. People have to realize that this story is fictional. The sexual part with Danielle's cousin could very well happen. As far as Danielle being on special vitamins (female hormones) they will have an effect on her attitude and she may actually like being a female and going all the way to S.R.S.
All in all, it was a great story and i can hardly wait to see more chapters written.  

I have enjoyed all of this story and look forward to more. Thank you for providing all of us this reading pleasure. I do hate to read comments that over-analyze what is fantasy fiction. None of the stories on this site will receive Nobel prizes for literature. As for "realty" - wonder why Superman is so popular? Give the author a break folks and sit back and have fun.

hi. impatiemtly waiting for more.
Danialle might learn how to do laundry.Proper way to put away her brothers underwear, and of course 'her'own panties and bras laid out properly. Not allowed to hide them in the laundry baskey from her brother. How about feminine hygene :).
Those of you who think danialle is being treated improperly must remember a male that truly does not want to be feminized would never allow any of it. And this is a fanatasy after all. If this type of story did'nt excite you and part of your fantasy you would'nt be here.

hey sue, wen u describe in ur story on how danielle "did her hair" could you describe it better. as, u noe, how she combed the hair, used pins, braided her hair and stuff like that. would be nice.

Take them on a holiday?  Tell them to kiss her ass would be better.  Or maybe hire a hitman to take them out.  Earlier in the story Daniele was doing enough housework to kill a person.  How could she manage to take on any more work?  I am still waiting for Daniele to "take care" of her family.  It will be so much fun to read.  Hey, with her doing all the cooking, maybe a slow poison with horible stomach cramps and intestinal bleeding.

  well done     the brat brother needs a little "blackmail" done on him...  give Daniele  a little help   >>>>  gloria could be told
about boy/girl  thing  and just love it....then Daniele gets a SRS
and wins a beauty contest ....wins  $$$$$$$$$  and stars in a television show making enough money to take the family on a great
vacation meeting a boy getting married and and starting a family
by addopting two  siblings  then finding out her brother is a
cross dresser and gay????? what to tell MOMMY he he he ....

Just love the story and hope that you contune writing.
Also, I think it's time that Danielle plans a bit of blackmail herself against that brat brother of hers!. Danielle should tell her best friend everything to maintain friendship and keep a secret, and ask for help for blackmailing that brat!.

Great Work!

Suejrz,

After part 8 - Just dropping you a note to let you know that I look  forward to each "next" chapter. I hope the story goes on and on in the direction that pleases your imagination. Sure, you are writing within a formula but you are doing really great at relationship nuances and roller coaster emotional development. Congratialations on a tremendously special contribution to Crystal's Storysite.  

Best,

anonymousOne

Part 8 was pretty good, but I agree: Danielle needs a spine. If I was her, I'd be telling little brother if you don't start helping out, then you don't eat. It's clear little Mikey is helpless without Mom and big sis, so I think blackmail or no, Danielle needs to put her foot down.

Furthermore, lots of boys are learing to do laundry and cooking in schools, both of my younger brothers took home ec in the early 80's while in school, so I can't see Mikey's school not doing it.

Why has Danielle let her brother walk all over her in the last episode and then have a big epiphany with him, it just seems a little strange.

I've been loving the story but I hope Danielle develops a spine. All it would take is one word to the mother telling of the blackmail and the brother could end up in skirts.

author's note..i guess her first hole closed up since she refused to wear her pierced earrings..LOL

OOPS!!!  Danielle got her ears pierced in part 1 (an early birthday present) then again in part 7 (the day after the sleepover).

love the story as usual. I really do hope that was not the last chapter. Please please continue writing.

I particularly like the contrasts between poor girly daniella and her brother and would love to see more embarasing situations.

For example  Daniella and her brother are taken ice skating by mom, and poor daniella has to wear a cute skating dress and tights. Or mom volunteers danialla to help out as santa's helper in the mall. She has to be the xmas fairy!

At any rate this is one of all my time favorite stories and i do hope it continues.

Hugs

No, I am waiting for the part where Danielle goes postal and kills the little brat of a brother and the horrible excuse for a mother.  Then I will get to laugh.  It will be so much fun.

What a great ending to the latest chapter.  Keep the story going, pretty please.

Well, IMHO Danielle could go to the girl's school, quietly, cause no fuss, and come out, oh say three years later, and go selling "her" body on the streets! That would be the best way to get back at the mother, especially if she was a church-goer.
  Now Mikey could grow up like his father -- a "Male superiority" type -- I hope.

More soon please

I just wanted to add my thanks for the opportunity to read this story. Keep up the good work.

This poor, poor boy. I cringe than can't wait to see what will happen next. The tension is amazing.

I can't agree with those who think his rape took this story away from reality.

Danielle had consistently chosen the known negative activity over the unknown consequences. She is incapable of accurately assuming a positive outcome and operates strictly from the fear of what might happen.

That is very much in line with human nature. Only three percent of us make our decisions based on the possible positive good. Ninety-seven percent choose based upon the fear of the consequences of NOY doing what we are asked to do.

I do not especially like the subject matter, as I fear for the mental stability of several characters. However, this story has been well within the realms of fictional plausibility.

In the first few chapters the author could have spent some time establishing back story. It remains to be seen why there is so much hate in this family and why the second son has a special Get-Out-of-Fail Free Card from all the abuse.

You are a skillful writer.

I hope this story is in the can. Nothing makes me more upset than the trend on Storysite for writers to write serials as they go. I've written three novels. As I wrote them, I constantly went back and changed the story to fit the new road my characters had taken. I worked off an outline for all three. I can't possibly imagine writing a serial as I went along. I do appreciate this is how many of the classics were written, but who within the writers on Storysite is the next Dickens?

I wonder how much respect writers have for their readers when they post incomplete stories and are constantly relying on our willingness to suspend our disbelief.

Good job on this story.

Jill

Just wanted to added to my two pence. The story is shaping up very nicely, I would like to hear more about the brothers relationship especially with Micky getting the upper hand with more embrassing situations. May be a fashion show for his friends? much to the joy of mom.

Another avenue i would like to see is more initmate relations with the girls experimenting with each other and his constance fear of be found out!

Anyway keep up the good work!
Steve

Maybe Danielle should be introduced to feminine hygene. Just to be more acceptable to being Danielle. After all, she is talking about sex with boys. She should be familiar with sanitary pads as well.

If mom only realized she is creating Mikey to be just like dad.  

you need to get the next one done!  omg! i can't wait for the sleep over!

Danielle is obviousely enjoying her ne feminine role. Maybe her brother should be made aware of how embarrassing it would be for him if his "sister's" secret was exposed. He would then have to start treating her as his sister. Danielle would be even further locked in the role. If Danielle really did'nt want to be a sissy, she would have never let it get further than the first panty wothout A violent fight. Now how many of us closet sissies would have just loved a day of Danielle's 'punishment"
Maybe her cousin is in for the same? Maybe Danielle will start seeing boys in a whole differant way. She is obviousely a submissive. A strong athletic domanent boyfriend?  

love this story. hope it continues. poor little danielle. I wish i was him!.

I love this story!  I can't wait for the slumber party.  This boy is so sissy now I just love it!  Please keep going!  

Emmm, shouldn't this be in the "stuck" category?
 Going to a girl's school would appear on "her" diploma, and all records of schooling. Any employer would see those records, and so would expect to see a female. Also, "he" could not go to another school without a lot of questions being asked!

hey nice story..moms probably a lil mad but i like the story. cant wait for the next part!! wats goin to happen to danielle next?? cheerleader? will she finally get into hormones?

I stick by my last remarks.  Hey Dan, assault weapons are legal again.

I just wanted to tell you I enjoyed reading part 5.and am looking forward to seeing how the sleepover goes.

Also want to say don't be discouraged by any negative comments. Stories are stories and frequently they do depart from the real world, but so what. That's why we enjoy them

For once I find myself in agreement with Jezzie - what a well thought out critque that was.  The mother is a sadistic bitch and REALLY deserves her cum-uppance that I trust will follow.  Unfortunately Danny/Danni is going to be a girl,  The vitamans are obviously hormanal, his/her breasts will grow only too quickly and the final snip will be inevitable.   Danny will end up loving it of course, who wouldn't, but I realy think he should go really crazy and murder his mother, brother and cousin first.

Today a 21 year TS office worker shot and killed 14 people with a high powered rifle from the top of a bell tower.The note found by the body after police killed her said I never wanted to be a girl but mum wanted me to be one!!!!

F a n t a s t i c   !!!!!!

great work.  please continue...

great keep it up can't wait till the next episode.  just don't keep us waiting so loooooonnnnnnngggggg.:)

The mother is psycotic. There is nothing cute or sexy about the systematic torture of your child while encouraging the other son to help.
sooner or later danny will snap and mickey will be the likely victim. mom seems awfully strict with one son while encouraging hooliganism in the other.

    I just wanted to tell you how much I have enjoyed reading your story about Mom's Unique Punnishment. It is well written and rather precise. I guess what I really liked about it was that it was written in the first person. I guess what that does is enable the reader to better feel that what is happening, is happening to them. Isn't that why many of us read these stories in the first place. I do hope there will be more.

    Far be it from me to tell someone else how to write their story, but I will tell you what I think many of us like. And that is a bit more detail for example, as to just what a dress may be like. Perhaps what kind of sleeves and collar? Does it have a sash at the waist? And, how does one feel when made to put one on? These are not to critize, but just a possible suggestion.

    Again, I really enjoyed your story. I tried to write something similiar one time, but never did anything with it. If I can figure out how, I will try to e-mail it to you, and you can do whatever you wish. Perhaps just read it, or trash it, or maybe make something out of it. Be my guest.

Regard, Bobbie

This story reminds me of the end of seventh grade just after I'd turned thirteen and just before we kicked off summer with our annual family getaway.  Mom came home early and caught me prancing around in her old rose-print bikini that I'd carefully fished out of our Goodwill collection box.  She was so furious that she practically ripped it off of me, then immediately retrieved her daffodil-print swimsuit and filmy off-white nightgown from the charity box as well, and packed them all into my suitcase.  She answered my pathetic blubbering with a hard belt-spanking, the like of which I hadn't received in years.  

When we got out to our somewhat secluded lake cabin, I had to don these bikinis on alternate days for our entire 7-day family getaway there. Each night I had to rinse out that particular day's bikini and hang it out to air dry on the patio, so except while sleeping or eating breakfast, one swimsuit was always on me while the other was drying on the patio (fortunately at that time the nearest neighbor was almost a half-mile distant, and we didn't know any of them).  Except for the print, they were identical, so the exact same tan was reinforced the whole trip.

Although I didn't have to wear panties or other femme undies, I did have to sleep in the aforementioned nightgown and leave it on until after breakfast, when it was time to slip on the dry bikini.  My 12 year old brother, with whom I fought constantly throughout adolescence, loved my situation and teased me relentlessly (for example, calling me "Rosie" if I wore the rose print or "Daffy" if I had on the daffodil print).  Usually mom was pretty even-handed but on this trip she did nothing to discourage his taunts, she wouldn't allow me to defend myself, and she even shushed dad when he tried to rebuke my brother (she always wore the metaphorical pants in our house).  The only favor she did me was not telling my brother exactly why I was being punished (of course she told dad).  She made me stay behind and cross-stitch with her while my brother got to go hiking and fishing with dad.  

Our third day there, on what turned out to be the longest afternoon of my life, mom washed and conditioned my hair, then tightly rolled it up (it was 1974 and my hair was a fashionable shoulder-length) before beginning the pedicure. They came back early because of an unexpected rain shower, and I was helplessly stuck in the recliner with a head full of rollers, while cotton balls separated my ten very red, very wet toenails mom had just lacquered. When I heard them outside and started to try to escape to the bathroom, mom gently but firmly put her hands on my shoulders, and guided me back into the recliner and said, "There's nowhere to run to, babydoll. Dry or wet, they're going to see them anyway."  Then while my dad and brother turned on the TV to watch the ballgame, mom decided to paint my fingernails as well. My brother kept grinning and blowing kisses, while dad studiously ignored me. After the comb out and arrangement (also unnecessarily done in front of them), I had the identical hairdo as my mom. Except for mom's initial discovery of me, I never felt lower in my entire life.

Things didn't completely return to normal for awhile even after we got back home and I could wear my own things again.  Thanks to the bikini tan lines, I couldn't enjoy the community pool or pickup basketball (shirts vs. skins!) for awhile.  Also, mom made sure that the very pretty embroidered sheet and pillowcases that she and I had cross-stitched made it into my room from time to time ... sometimes even when I had a friend sleeping over!  

My mom warned my brother that he was in for even worse treatment if word ever got out about what had happened to me, so he kept his mouth shut (although he did once spend a Sunday afternoon at home in a dress and heels after dropping a very subtle hint about that time to a friend).  

(Sorry for the overly-long reminiscence, but it felt therapeutic to finally let it out).  Anyway, it really sucked but at least it was only for that seven days.  I can't imagine the agony your protaganist Danny would be enduring.

I'll be interested to see what direction you take your admittedly masterful work from here. If the drugs make Danny too compliant, then there's no tension anymore and the story is effectively over.  If his situation becomes widely known, then he's made a ward of the state (his self-absorbed father would be worse than useless) and his sick bitch of a mother could perhaps get the help she so desperately needs.

Danny needs some REAL motivation to continue a charade this humiliating. Maybe his mom has some financial dirt (embezellment, anyone?) on Danny's dad that, should it come out, put him in prison for awhile ... but as long as Danny cooperates his dad stays free.

Personally, I hope that the girl's school thing doesn't work out.  Maybe one of the nuns could somehow discover his true gender and quietly expel him so as to avoid scandal.

Back at public high school, Danny's mom, even with the help of an unwitting social-crusader attorney, is more limited in what she can get away with.  Poor Danny will just have to "make do" with very light makeup ("is he or isn't he?"), a soft unisex 'do, darling undies, delightfully scented powder (but not strong perfume), pants without pockets, "wrong-buttoning" shirts, keds, socks that match the pastel shirt color, and the like. She can make it sting just a little more by escorting him to school athletic functions and other events while wearing a matching outfit.

Cosmetology, not auto repair. Sewing, not metal or wood shop. Jazzercise P.E. elective, not weightlifting. Having him serve as the batboy for his former teammates on the school baseball team would be interesting, especially in short shorts and a bodyshirt in team colors.

If you want to be really cruel, start a romance between Karen and Mikey while Danny still pines away, aching for Karen. The mom could 'suggest' that just to show there's no hard feelings, Danny could practice his cosmetology homework by fixing up Karen's hair, nails, and makeup for all her dates with Mikey, and to practice his sewing skills, he could sew her a beautiful formal gown for prom.  
It would sting even more if Karen, like Danny's mom, sees Danny so utterly lacking in masculinity that she has no problem with undressing right in front of him, and reassures a mildly perturbed Mikey, "Oh, so what if the sweet little swish takes a peek? He's harmless ... now a hunk like YOU I do have to be careful of!"

I really hope you don't revisit the rape stuff. It detracted greatly and added nothing.

ilove this story. can't wait to see how poor danielle gets on at school.
hope he has to do lots and lots of girly things!

this is one of my all time favorites. please keep writing!

hugs.

I almost stopped reading.  I'm sorry, Sue; I have to admit that you are a good writer but you have taken a story that was fun and turned it into a horror story with no likable characters.  I really do hate what you have done with Dan - or perhaps what you have had had this sadistic bitch you've created in place of a mom do to Dan.  Now, apparantly she's feeding him drugs to keep him submissive.  So she's a liar and promise breaker now, and I hate her smarmy " It was your choice" speech - sure, a choice between the girl's school and getting killed, and she damn well knows it.  BUT, the worst thing is, she's right; it WAS his choice:  WHY DIDN'T HE DO SOMETHING ???  I was so upset to find that his tantrum was only a daydream; it wouldn't have been my choice of a way to resist, but at least he would have done SOMETHING to defend HIMself. If he's too wimpy to confront his so-called mom, why doesn't he run away ???  If he was willing to go to military school, life on the streets wouldn't be that bad. ... OR run to a DCFS office; what mom is doing is clearly abuse. Are the drugs that strong??  I would not be surprised, after this chapter, to find that mom was behind Jason's actions.  

It is just so frustrating, after the wonderful start of chapters 1- 2 1/2, to see all the fun go out of this story as it spirals downward into nothing but  a female abuser and a wimpy sissy and more humiliation.  Even if now Dan strikes back, it will be sad because I can't see from what's happened to him so far, how he can ever grow up well adjusted.  If he finally reaches a "too much" point, now, his reaction will probably be one that will either result in harm to himself and/or others or a life as a woman hating mysoginist - how can he ever trust any woman again after  this betrayal by the one woman most important to him?  On the other hand, because of the nature of his feminization, I can't see HIM ever becoming happy as a girl, just a submissive miserable sissy.  Sure he has choices, but I think this chapter pretty much has made it impossible  for any future choices to result in either his or her personal happiness.

After part04 - This story continues to surprise and entertain. I am EXTREMELY glad that you have been able to ignore the harshist of the criticisms posted here and elsewhere to remain true to your characters. Keep going, you are creating a classic.

Best,

anonymousOne

If you keep to fantasy of a boy being compelled to dress as a girl you can maintain the story. He can be fitted for  his first formal gown, modeling for the school fashion show, etc. But do not destroy the story with sexual acts.

Outstanding writing - great story.  This reads very real to me - more so than almost any other story I have read.  Great work - please do continue - this has made my (short) favorites list - even before it is completed.  Excellent - congratulations!!!  Elizabeth

After part 4
I like the quality of writing and the way the tension has built up.  I accept this is fiction, nevertheless, I fail to understand the mother's motivation in coercing one of her sons into going to a girl's school when, by her own admission, the punishment was for the summer.  A more sensible approach (for the mother) would have been to accept that Dan had served the punishment and would never repeat the bahavior necessitating the punishment.
The other difficulty for the author is how to end this story - I will be interested to see how you handle this.
Thanks for the time and trouble you have put into this story, Suejrz.
Hugs, Annabel

If he dont go wacko and makes a life for herself after girl school .Well it should be if she got any backbone bye chow mum brother and have a hell of a nice life and slam the door on the way out and never see them again.Nothing should hurt a mother more than that. But with her mum  who knows.

I continue to enjoy this story.  Obviously. it is not every reader's cup of tea.  I should think by the nature of this web site we viewers have a very diverse set of interests.  I also think there is room for all of us under Crystal's roof, even if each of us enjoys only 10% of what is posted.  Thank you Suejrz for your contribution.  

This story should be called:  

"How to make your son a future psychopath serial killer".

I really hope he turns into to one . But then again,  he has no fiber and is probably a natural born sissy anyway.

The story started out good, then progressed to a more uncaring mother. She was more interested in the humiliation of her son and using him as a tool to get back at her ex-husban for the trouble in their marrige. Then it gets really bad when he is being forced to go down on his cousin. It was a bit to far. I'm not a prude but this is a story of an under age kid being force into sex acts with a relaitve. While this never happened to me I know some other girls who it has happened to. The writer though very talented could have found a way for him to come to accept his forced womanhood to his mother's dismay! Forcing the humiliation back on her never excepting her son to go that far and having him embrace womanhood fully! Catching him with a boy of HER choise! Then showing realization that her son was gone forever and it was her fault for wanting to get back at her ex.

The story started out good, then progressed to a more sinister and uncaring mother. Humiliation is one thing, what she has done in this chapter is down and out cruel beyound reasoning. The boy has got to have a screw loose or maybe even more to let this sex stuff happen. Well, maybe he is just one of those stupid kids, you know the kind. Instead of drawing a line or saying enough is enough, they use excuses to justify their actions.

As a story this is well written and scripted if what you have done is what you wanted in the first place. I just don't see a boy letting all this happen to him with threats as the catalist. He was alone with Jason and if I were him I would have bit him so hard he would have needed treatment in an Emergency Room! Then how could he get away with what he was doing? I would have confronted my mother with how SHE had set me up for this treatment and then I would have beaten the crap out of my little brother right in front of her.

I would dare her then to evenm try to keep me in dresses. She would be arrested and I would not even care! Why? Because she sure doesn't care about me! Her selfish desires for a daughter are worth more to her than having a loving son. No she wants to humiliate him into being a little subserviant sissy.

All in all you are a very good writer, but as you can see by my comment, this is not to my liking. To each their own I say.

Good luck, you are a good writer.
Huggles
Angel

Just love the story although Mom is almost pathologically cruel.  Hurry with the next part!!!!

Hugs...

Kitty

Well---  It is up to your excellent writing skill.--- And the story is well scripted, and well well sequenced.
 In my opinion, you have ruined the storyline.  You started off with Jason being a disliked, troublemaking cousin, then, you contrarily ended this chapter with an unecessary homosexual rape experience.  I hope you reconsider and perhaps rewrite the ending.  Have Danneille refuse and go along and change into his boy clothes and sit there in miasma until his mother and aunt come home and take note.  Have him tell them precisely what Jason is doing, and that he is ending the whole charade. It is then up to the aunt and mother to take proper action.
 If that doesn't please you, then maybe you can come up with a better alternative.  Almost anything would be better than that nightmare rape scene. You described it well, but I am here to tell you, the person experiencing it, will forever be defensive, and most likely be antisocial, perhaps even to cause destructive situations out of fear, frustration, and rage. One never, ever, recovers from rape.  

You've destroyed your story. You create a complete story of the petticoat discipline. You have him shopping with his girlfriend and go into complete details as what he is wearing and the fear of being found out. Then you describe homosexual acts of a teenager. I agree with Jezzi Stewart, follow her advice. I would hope you redo your story.

after part 3.
  I enjoyed the first half, BUT Iwas really, really disappointed with the second half sexfest to the point where I stopped reading.  Why?  From the fact that you wrote that his Aunt felt Jason was becoming more and more of a discipline problem, and from his obnoxious teasing of Dan in public, I fully expected to see him in dresses.  Why didn't Danielle just tell his mom and Aunt that Jason was trying to blackmail him.  Given what you wrote his aunt would most likely have believed him.  I think Jason ending up in skirts is a much more realistic outcome than for Dan to engage in homosexual acts.  And I hate it that that obnoxious prick jason won and seems to be turning dan into a slut.  If I was Dan, I'd be hating everyone but Karen by now, including myself.

Wonderfully written! Really enjoyed the ballet class part. You can really sympathize with Danielle with his brother watching him. Great tension. Will Danielle end up in a recitial attended by his brother and father?

First, this is very well written and captures the reader no matter their opinion of the charecters or of the story lines.

Second, I agree with Jezzi Belle. The mother sure wanted a daughter didn't she? She got two boys instead and now she sees a chance at getting her daughter after all. "NO MATTER WHAT!"

Mother? Not the typical mother that is for sure. She is using cruelty, humiliation, blackmail and fear as her weapons. No 'real' mother would do that to a child she loves. So, love for her child is not her motivation. Her motivation is her desire for a daughter and now she has found a way to get and make the daughter she fantasized about having all these years.

A selfish desire pushes love aside and consumes the person until they attain what it is they are desiring. What good is it having a daughter that hates you? All she will be is a body that appears as the mother desires her to appear. A robot performing a set routine day after day. A robot full of fear and tention that will have to explode in one way or another.

Exposure! That is his real fear and justly so, because it WILL ruin his life. His little brother will expose him if he hasn't already. I think the most cruelest thing his mother has done so far is making him share a room enfemme with his little brother. Now that is sick and sadistic! To top that off she exposes him to his little brothers baseball team and those at the park. That is sadistic as well!

Love? Not on your life! This boy is headed for a big fall and when it happens his life will end. Will he survive as Danielle? Only the writer knows!

fourteen? Shaving and hormones have to be near in his future or he will be the sissy and everyone will know it.

Great writing and I want to kill his mom!

Huggles
Angel

My heart is pounding and I want to jump in a save that boy! Just like Jezzi Belle!

As a per op TS who has in the past tried  to do my self in and I know what it s like to have  live a life you hate .Well this boy unless deep down he is Tg or TS will most likely a be found dead in the bath wrists cut or pills overdose in  the hated feminine bedroom or hanging from something. If not mum may find a craving knive in her guts as her new daughter plunge's it into her. Being the USA maybe getting hold of a firearm and having to be taken out by the police after killing mummy brother and anyone else in his /her way. This is a good story  I am not knocking it but if he does hate it as much as he says .Then this is one of the things that may happen. But then again maybe deep down she finds she is or he is TS . If he is not he may kill himself kill her or become another serial killer of women  killing out of hate and taking the green mile walk at the Big House.

Great story, nice development. I really liked the bit where mom gives the impression to others that Dan likes wearing his girls clothes and everything that goes with his situation.

Mommy was very disturbed when she went to awaken young Danielle one morning, only to find that her son had hung himself with a bra.  His suicide note read, "If I can't be a boy in this life, perhaps God will let me be one in the next."
Authorities are now investigating the incident.

It seems that you have started the blood flowing.  The story is so well written that most of your readers are drawn into it. As an aside, I would hope the little brother, who aprobably has told the whole baseball team already, would be subjected to the same requirements. By the time school is resumes, Dan will no longer have a life to go back to. Everyone but Dan will be aware of his situation. He is smart enough to see the fix his mother is putting him in.  Well maybe he can run away.  Maybe go live with his father?  Delinquency does start to look good.  Hope to see the next chapter soon. Thanks for sharing with us.

Suejrz,

After Chapter 2 - Just writing to let you know that I am enjoying your piece. I especially like that your characters keep surprising me. Thank you gain for your time in writing this. I look forward to the next installment.

anonymousOne

After part 2

<<  You need to be totally immersed into your new role for the punishment to be successful. >>

Define successful.  Successful at hating his mom?  Quite possible.  Successful in getting him to distrust all women?  Quite possible.  Successful in getting him to do something incredibly stupid like go postal and hurt someone, namely her or little brother?  Quite possible.  Successful at hurting himself?  Quite possible?  Successfvul at making him a better human being?  Not likely, as witness what you have the two say next:

<<  [mom]  Remember, this is all for your own good.You don't want to end up as some juvenile delinquent, do you?"
[Danny]  "At this point I wasn't too sure. MYBE BEING A JUVENILE DELINQUINT WOULDN'T BE SO BAD. IT COULDN'T BE ANY WORSE THAN BEING A GIRL.   At least I could hang out with some guys.  ... "
[mom]  I'm trying to make sure that you don't get yourself into trouble. You were on the wrong path and I couldn't stand by and allow that to happen. >>

For his own good ???  From what he's thinking, sounds like what she says she doesn't want could end up happening; I can see him running away and really turning to crime  because of the way she's going about the petticoating.   I can understand the petticoat punishment.  Where she goes too far and gets into the sadistic is in making his brother and his dad think the feminization is his idea. (This has more to do with getting back at dad than doing what's good  for him.)  Does she love her younger son?  How will she feels when, because of what she's doing, Danny goes off the deep end at his teasing and really hurts him?  

<<  You might as well try to have a little fun this summer since your punishment won't be changed. You can complain and gripe all summer or you can just stop whining and try to enjoy being a girl. It's really up to you. But either way, you're going to be my daughter this summer.  >>

If she wants him to enjoy being a girl, she is sure going about it the wrong way.  There is no carrot to go with this stick.  Why not, "Cooperate and I'll let you have your sports magazines back"  Or "If you cooperate on the ballet lessons, I'll let you play girl's softball" ?  Things like that.

Please, please don't let him be seduced into enjoying  this.  He should fight this tooth and nail.  It is not fair.  The punishment, petticoat discipline, is valid, but how it's being applied does not fit the crime and is counterproductive.  He should do only what he is specifically directed to do. Don't read the teen magazines, leave them lay exactly where his mom set them, same with the dolls, etc.  If mom tries to have "fun" mother daughter experiences, cooperate but make sure she knows it's only fear making you do it, stuff like that.  FIGHT this!  If nothing else, escape, run away, get the hell out of there!

I actually hope he is outed, because then she won't have any hold over him anymore.

From the above, Suejrz, you might think I'm not enjoying your story, but you're wrong, I am.  To get me this angry, your story has to be well written, and so far it's given me a good cardiovascular workout without having to resort to actual nasty sweaty exercise.  keep up the good work.

I am greatly enjoying this story. By the time we viewers have read the second part, we understand why Danny will have to try acting as feminine as possible, rather he accepts being a girl or not.

At first, I did not care for the presence of the little brother, seeing it as a distraction from the plot.  Now I think it adds an elememt of tension.  No one might anticipate the possible "stupid" things an eleven year old might accidently do or say at some critical point that could expose Danny.  Maybe a close call or two could be incorporated.  Keep up the good work.  


danny

as the first commenter said excellent beginning.  some of the elements described above esp, escape attempt and aftermath, going to school and hating every minute of it would be great.  can't wait to read next chapters.  better use of paragraphs would make reading easier otherwise very well done. kudos to you.

This story combines the elements of Daphne's Secret Garden and Alana's story "Don't tell my father" however, keep on writing. Do not relieve the tension of his dressing. If he enters school as a girl all the tension will be gone, he can fully dress for costume parties, etc.

Good story but why not show what a boy in that situtation would run or if not harm himself and the fall out from that. But it a good story and I expect in the end he will end up full time girl

I loved this story. You really have a talent in describing the delicious humiliation that young Danny is experiencing. Please don't stop. Let us know what happens at Daniele's Birthday dinner party. It would great to follow his/her summer adventures, especially if Danny secret girly life is exposed to his school baseball buddies! I would then really like Danny to have to endure going back to school as a girl. Since his Mom works at his school, I am sure she could arrange for this to happen. That would be so exciting, especially if he is required to be the perfect Miss Priss or else! Thanks for the great start. Please write the next chapter to Danny's girly life soon. I can hardly wait!

Curtsy?  Will someone explain this fascination with an antiquated custom?

A petty good story.  Well written if somewhat derivative.  It wil be interesting to see if it charts some new territory.  

I'm curious as to why Danny doesn't just tell his brother what their mom is doing to him? They do share a bedroom after all.

if only more of us could have such a punishment. More please.

Please, please, don't keep us waiting to long to see what happens next. This is good stuff