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More Than That
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by cbd washington dc on 03/02/21
Ic9V8p Looking forward to reading more. Great post.Thanks Again. Much obliged.

Comment by this site on 05/13/17
RV0Acs Major thankies for the post.Really looking forward to read more. Keep writing.

Comment by Mariah on 05/23/13
Another great story with a pleasant ending! Thanks Janet.

Comment by Aleesha on 01/20/09
Yet another great story from you. It is a sweet story, predictable yes but I like happy endings.

Comment by Alyssa on 07/30/08
This story was a bit longer than many of yours I have read so far, but I loved it, engaging as always, keeps me reading.  I hope to read even more of your stories, because I have enjoyed every single one I have read thus far.  There are places where punctuation and grammar could do with a bit of work, but the meaning is still clear enough, keep it up ^_^

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/24/07
S.R. IS NUTS. THIS STORY IS ABOUT A TEEN THAT FINDS THE GIRL INSIDE HIM AND THE LOVE SHE NEEDS TO BE COMPLETE.

Comment by Ashley on 01/22/03
Unbeleivabley awesome - it pulled me in from the very first moment...  I can't wait for your next story to come out.  

Comment by Pervette on 01/21/03
Another delightful story!  I don't know how you keep making them
fresh & new, but you do, & I look forward to every one.
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I had one problem, however: the nature of the party was never made
clear, or why it's so important to her parents.  Yes, they're the
chairs, but it's no ordinary party that requires chairs, & a
sentence of explanation would have helped.
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I did notice one other thing.  About 3/4 of the way through the
story, Mom says, "If you had said that having a son that wanted to
be a girl, then yes."  This needs some rewriting or punctuation to
make it clear.
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Terrific otherwise.  Keep 'em coming, Janet.
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Pervy

Comment by Lisa Pagent on 01/21/03
Janet, as usual, a fine job!

A Very Sweet and Sentimental story that -was- different than others you have written. I would have even loved to see it longer!

Don't listen to the naysayers here in the comment area. We LOVE your stories, and can never have too much of your stories.

To me, you and Crystal are some of the finest examples of Sweet and Sentimental writing. Brava!

Hugzz,
Lisa

Comment by Jacki Pett on 01/21/03
I throughly enjoyed this one. Well written.

Comment by chrisl on 01/21/03
I like your stories to a point. When you state gender and sexuality relate causually you lose me. On one level your stories invalidate gay/lesbian sexuality because of this.
I really enjoyed the first half of the story but would have prefered it if she ended up with the girl :)
Hugs Chrisl.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/21/03
well written and well worth taking the time to read.  You're always one of my favorite writers and I enjoy all your wonderful sweet work.

Comment by SR on 01/21/03
Read it all before--the guy gets barely nudged into it, protests weakly, decides he likes it and despite being hetero, suddenly wants a boyfriend.  Give us something different.  This is well written but so predictable it's not worth reading



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