Hi Britney.
Good work! I Liked it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

I'm only a few paragraphs into this story, but I just *had* to stop and comment. For what it's worth, there is a story behind the story...

Storysite has a "cyberboard," a bulletin board forum to which anyone may post without registering first. In a recent thread, someone asked "Do GG girls get turned on by these stories as well?" One 'Joreymay' replied in the affirmative, and went on to say "we write them, too." Now, I had always assumed that most TG fiction is written by TG people. The idea that there is even a small group of Genetic Girls writing it was immediately interesting to me, because it seemed obvious that someone born female would bring a significantly different viewpoint to her writing; Joreymay did discuss that in her post. I would love to be able to identify such authors so that I could read their work as a body, and get a feel for how those differences show themselves. I don't know where I could find such a list, but I though that I could at least start with Joreymay.

As it turns out, she wrote the story 'Angel' in the MORFS universe. Having read 'Sanura's Tale' and 'Yin Yang,' I suddenly began to wonder if Britney McMasters might also be a GG. I wandered over to the MORFS website, found a few paragraphs about Britney in the wiki, saw an autobiography mentioned, Googled for it, and wound up here.

My question was answered by the end of the first paragraph -- if I could believe what was written in it. A little more than half way through part 1, and I just had to stop and write, as I already said.

A search of TG fiction could probably turn up at least a dozen stories that start just as this one does: girlfriend talks her boyfriend into crossdressing to compete in a boys-dressed-as-girls' beauty pageant; minor variations on this theme form the premise of hundreds of TG stories. To top that off, this story contains the two most common elements found in TG stories of any sub-genre: 1) the main character is the same size as his sister, girlfriend, mother, or other potential clothes donor, and the clothes fit well; and 2) the main character has a body and face that makes him a totally convincing and unusually beautiful girl when dressed and made up (this forms a sub-genre of its own, which I call "pretty boy becomes beautiful girl"; in many of those, the main character turns out to be intersexed, or to have a hormone imbalance that grows breasts and hips). Additionally, I find elements common to other "girlfriend dresses up her boyfriend for an event" stories: the girlfriend starts in early to give her boyfriend "girl 101" lessons, and time for him to practice; the girlfriend finds dressing and then seeing her boyfriend as a girl to be a tremendous sexual turn-on; the boyfriend, though he was initially resistant to the idea, likes what he sees and feels, and agrees with the girlfriend to continue dressing after the event; and clothing (including lingerie) is described in detail (can you really remember your first pair of panties that clearly? I sure can't).

In other words, this story reads just like more than half the TG fiction I have seen, yet the author claims that it is all (except for the name changes) true. I guess that several good cliches deserve one more: this sure is life imitating art.

Britney dear,
I loved your story of transformation and the innocent erotic encounters between Brit and Katie.  I would love to read something of yours with more mature characters with a bit of an "R" rating.  Guess I'll have to browse your other works here.  Thanks...kisses!!!

Good story... Please continue your other stories aas well! :)

What a wonderful story.  You must continue. So much suspence.  I would be willing to wager that Greg gets into Brit's panties!!!  He seems rather intrigued at seeing his long time buddy so dressed.  He definately is going to want to know more about the whole thing and explore the ramifications.

Very nice, Britney.  Now that you've given us hints to his future dressing you *have* to continue.  Please.

No question about if you should finish this story.  The answer is a resounding  - YES!

Though there were a couple of speling issues (less than 5 from what I could find) this story needs to go through to completion.  Some questions answered.  For example, will Britney go out with Greg?  Will Greg even ask Britney to go out (I think yes)?  What other situations will Britney find herself in?  How will she do on her own for the first time?

Looking forward to more.

Starhawk

Dear Britney:

Well it is not your whole life but and autobiography of your crossdressing. Your start and yes you were right that is what we were interested in.

They say a true story is that much more powerful and certainly that is verifiable here. I absolutely adore this story, and I don't write that often. I hope it turns out well, and I hope you continue this very enjoyable bio.  If you put out a new episode every day I would love it! Yes we fans aren't demanding, just impossible, huh?

This story is much more visual for me than your previous ones that have pictures. Your word pictures have a lot of power. Thanks.

Hugs,

Kristi

veeeery good so far. now you have in suspence. when is the next part coming

Lovely start to many sequels I hope! Britney's adventures should have been mine. I am so jealous!  Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

What I love about this story is the sheer unadulterated pleasure he gets from becoming Britney - I can really identify with that.

I do hope we get some more soon!

Great!! you are still here.... Please continue all the stories... we've been on a too long hyatus...

This really, really happened?  You lucky minx, you!  Words escape me completely.  Dying to read more!

Welcome back! I sure did miss your writing Britney. Are you planning on finishing any of your previous works you had started a few years ago?

PLEASE, Pretty please with sugar on top and a cherry too?

Great start on this Britney, I know how tough writing this is going to be. With my story 'A Life Ever Changing' as it turned out, to be the best therapy I could have ever hoped for. Giggle, giggle. I laughed and I cried; some of the memories were very painful to bring to the surface after so many years had gone by. Memories locked deep within myself forgotten, but never lost.

I hope to see more of your older uncompleted works completed or at least added to.

Huggles, from a big fan of yours
Angel

You know my e-mail. The story has a great start.  It both looks good and will cause many to be curious as to the following chapters. Much to talk about, write me soon!

Samantha

"More Than"