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Morgana
by Maggie Finson

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Comment by Red Sonja on 03/03/14
I followed you on Fictionmania, then followed you here. I'm about to go visit other sites that came up searching your name. I'm especially hoping to find any missing parts up to and including the ending. Some things deserve to be finished with the same great writing displayed throughout the other parts of this magnificent epic adventure.

This is a tale deserving of a magnificent ending as only you can provide.

Red


Comment by Chris Baker on 05/31/12
Maggie, please please tell us the rest of the story. You do it so well but then you seem to have stopped.  I know you work on other things and the ones I've found are wonderful and I'm always worried that I haven't found them all.  I love this story as much as I love the tales about Fey over at Crystal Hall.  I hope you are well and it is just other projects that have stalled the progress on this one.
Thanks for what you have given us.
Chris

Comment by Larry on 02/05/12
i agree with other reader comments, about this being a very good story. it is a shame we are left hanging.

Comment by Maggie on 02/03/11
I really love this story. You did a wonderfull job. The characters are very enticing. I hope you will someday continue this series.

Thank you so much for your great work

Maggie


Comment by Red on 08/31/10
I like this. It's a good start. However, you haven't added anything to this in seven years. Have you given up? YOui shouldn't. This is a fine start to what is a good story, with strong character development, multiple love interests and a moral!

Comment by becky on 05/17/07
 I am really impressed with your story Morgana!  I really enjoyed it a lot.  It is well thought out.
 Are you going to write more of the story?  I hope so.  Grangrads.

Comment by Dagnabbit on 04/29/06
i like the story its very good, could you please add some more.

Comment by Bob on 04/20/06
It's a great storie but it really need's a end.

Comment by Shannon on 09/11/05
Maggie, you have to finish this story. You've got me hanging by my fingernails. Please get back to Morgana.

Shannon

Comment by Gavin E on 04/24/05
Incredible!!  I love the story, I can't wait to see how it ends.  You are truely an aspiring author Maggie, keep it up!

Comment by Jerry on 07/13/03
I love the story!!!!!

Comment by Allan on 10/23/02
I read this story and I look forwerd to reading more of Morgana,  this story strikes close to my haert because of my time in the navy and the times that we did traning.  

Comment by Stephanie C. on 06/16/01
This is great work Maggie.I love it!
I have toyed with the idea of space going elves in one of my non-TG stories but I like your concept better. Guess I'll have to come up with something else. Just PLEASE don't introduce a feline alien species. Then I'll be out of ideas. ;)
Keep up the fantastic work. I can't wait to read the rest.

LOVINIT, Steph

Comment by Nellie D on 05/02/01
Part 2 only builds more of the story that takes a vivid imagination to produce. I hope Maggie favors us with more soon.

Comment by Nellie D on 05/01/01
A very good story and the beginning of a interesting new universe. I can't say it is total without flaws but the writing filled with much detailed description outweighs any flaws.



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