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The Most Natural Thing in the World
by Michelle C

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Comment by Simran on 07/11/12
I'd say you played it right. If you coudln't stop yourself from putting it all out there, at least you didn't press her too hard with a  Look, you either date me now or I'm out of here  bonehead play. The fact that she kissed you was good; it means she's got feelings. Of course, you have to be prepared for the fact that those feelings won't be strong enough to bring her back to you when she's done rebounding, but you have to remember that she _is_ rebounding right now, and she knows it (which is why she won't date you right now; unless, of course, she's just not into you enough and is too afraid to say it, but what can you do in that case?). I think you've set yourself up as well as you can; hanging out with her in this stage may be tough, but keep yourself in her mind's eye and things may work out. If Sports Agent Dan is as dickish as all salesman chances are very good she'll give you a shot.

Comment by Tiela on 07/09/12
, they'll remember you and not stop thkining about you and will eventually forget if they were pissed at you or wanting to jump your bones, conflating all the feelings.While this never worked for me, it certainly does explain why so many women stay with/pine over men who are f-ing aholes to them. So follow your heart and give her a talking to; just don't be wimpy. Good luck, Fletcher. Take heart in knowing that if she doesn't happen, all it takes is another trip (or six) to the cupcake place and you'll find someone.

Comment by Silvia on 07/18/10
Now I like and accept incest!
Silvia.

Comment by Silvia. on 12/17/09
I don't like and nor accept incest!
Silvia.

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 05/27/03
I agree with Donna...Even though you show support for Michelle from her parents...you use this as an excuse for incest...I have been a post op TS for almost 34 years - before that I was raised as a girl...NEVER! NEVER! NEVER in my young life growing up as a girl, even though I had loving support, was I ever mistreated in this manner. Are you aware of how many laws were violated in this story? No loving parent would mistreat their child like this...either the parent destroys the child or supports the child on this issue but never molests them to the point of violating the sanctity of the family. And what about Sharon? What did she think of her brother now turned into her sister? What did she think about Michelle borrowing her clothes? Would they still get along like they did before? My God, Michelle C, just what were you thinking? I'm glad I had a proper upbringing...never in my wildest dreams would I ever think of something like this.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 02/26/03
Part 2 is devastating Michelle.  I'm not only "there" girlfriend, I bought real estate and I'm moving in!

Kisses!!!

Sissy Prissy

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 02/25/03
Michelle,

I just read part one and I am enthralled!  At 43 Now I've just come out for a second time to my mother, and this time with my full intent to finaally resolve lifelong issues with SRS.  Even though she is 75 now and no where near the beauty queen I once envied, how I long to have just the acceptance, recognittion, and love from her for the girl I am that is given your character by her nother rather than the rejection  that comes in it's place.  Good story.  Totally realte to our heroine.

Hugs,

Sissy

Comment by Donna on 11/25/02
No No No!!!   As a transexual myself I have enjoyed anal intercourse on many many occasions, but i cannot concieve that a father could do these things to his own son - whether she be on the way to womanhod or not.

Comment by Allan on 07/16/02
Michelle wrote a very nice story and besides the transgender subject she dared to touch a very sensitive issue: incest. For this reason maybe some readers will feel uncomfortable reading it. However the ones with an open mindeness and maturity to understand that, we like or not, the incest is much more spread in our society than we barely can imagine will enjoy it as a delightful small masterpiece it really is.

For me that had undergone a similar situation with a friend and my own mother it was a unique opportunity to revive cheered memories.

Many thanks Michelle!

Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/23/01
I know the rating was XXX but, I do so like to read some stories like this once in awhile. Your writting was very well done and I think it deserves another part to it. Some will likely not enjoy the incest that is here but, for them they can read someone elses story. A very nice story even if it is a fantascy.

Comment by Sscot T on 11/17/01
Thank you for opening up to me...these stories are inciteful, honest and tender. May you continue to write and live as honest and sweet as you are today. Fiction always contains an amazing amount of truth in it; what better way can the mind have for telling us the pieces that are so vital to hear, even when we try to hide from them! I thank the Goddess for all the wonderful tricks built into each of us that we become our true selves despite any obstacles. and on that note.... Sweet dreams!

Comment by Tommi on 10/05/01
So sweet. So full of love and understanding. If we lived in a perfect world all things done to nurture and deepen love between people would be as beautiful as this story.

Comment by Fair Frank on 09/04/01
part two... hmmm, how delicious.... you alternately made me want to be entered and enter, suck and be sucked, snuggle and fuck. gender within gender, acceptance of the most loving kind. Thanks.

Comment by Fair Frank on 09/04/01
Fabulous part one! Kept me wet and wanting more... so on to part two.

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 09/03/01
Having now read both parts, I can only say that this is utterly
sick and depraved.  I LOVE that in a story!!

Pervy

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 08/31/01
Well conceived and well written!  The writer handles the most delicate issues with finesse.  She creates just the right amount of tesnion and resolves things so very well!

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 08/28/01
This story is off to a wonderful start!  It sounds as if the
whole family is kinky, which if so is neat.  I'm looking
forward to the continuation.

Pervy



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